Gleaned In the Smokey Mountains

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Gleaned in the Smokey Mountains

A splash of white paint, just where you sleep
that's what the Wise-blood Naomi advised.
I remember her hair so thin it looked
	like ham gravy running down her forehead.
"No need for Passover blood. Not here.
	Not in these hills. Here,
The spirits have a diferent master."

Dutifully, we obeyed yet
that night, just before the gloaming,
	blood dripped from above.
Atomized droplets misting from the ceiling, 
	evincing a hidden chamber above?

My elders gathered us 
	in a hush, 
we could not know 
	to what or whom to pray
Lighting through now morning mist
We hastened for the bright of day.

See, childhood holds such unbalanced dreams
My parents gone; no trace of any shaman.
Still, inscribed in me ever lies
A shuddering before things unseen
	perhaps obscene
Things I sense are never
To be gleaned.

Grain may be gleaned as
In that painting by Millet;
Barbizon School, yet how
Was I to learn to distinguish seed from bract
Matthew from Ruth separate
As I am in an different century
	on a different continent?
Am I to walk as Odysseus to a land which
Knows not of sea. 
Have them mistake my oar
	for winnowing fan?
Can things ever be what they seem?

I see them still and know
They are not there; yet, 
Formed amid blood-spray and youth 
	it remains difficult
To suss the saved from the damned
	the seen from unseen since

Witching was my midwife... 

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 7/4/2019 11:51:00 AM
Richard, this poem has a mystical, magical quality that appeals to me greatly. "See, childhood holds such unbalanced dreams My parents gone; no trace of any shaman. Still, inscribed in me ever lies A shuddering before things unseen perhaps obscene Things I sense are never To be gleaned." Loved this! Welcome to Poetry Soup!
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