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Slowly it slithers Aquamarine tears appear Nature's life begins

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/16/2010 9:30:00 AM
Shiki, many congratulations on your win in Brian's fine contest >> James
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Date: 1/14/2010 12:46:00 PM
I totally and completely love your title! I'm also glad that a haiku got a placement in this contest. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/14/2010 8:58:00 AM
Interesting Haiku that you have composed. The color aquamarine is beautiful. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 1/14/2010 5:50:00 AM
Congratulations Shiki, on your success in Brian’s “Flow River, Flow” contest. Your poetic skills shine. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 1/12/2010 7:27:00 PM
congratulations on your win,Shiki!
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Date: 1/12/2010 4:51:00 PM
congratulations Shiko on your win!-Robert
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Date: 1/12/2010 9:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest, Shiki! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 1/12/2010 7:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with your lovely Haiku. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/12/2010 1:14:00 AM
How creative and imaginative. Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest with this delightful entry, Shiki.
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Date: 1/12/2010 12:32:00 AM
Congrats on your success in my contest Shiki.Rgds Brian.My latest contest RHYME TIME is now open
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Date: 1/8/2010 12:00:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Shiki.Rgds Brian
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Date: 9/1/2009 4:30:00 PM
Nice Write, Loved It, Always Cherica Lynn <3
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Date: 5/26/2009 8:05:00 PM
We're told all life sprang from the sea and this poem allows us to relive that birth. Beautiful haiku, Shiki! Love, Carolyn
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