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Glass Candy

Slowly it slithers Aquamarine tears appear Nature's life begins

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James Fraser

Date: 1/16/2010 9:30:00 AM

Shiki, many congratulations on your win in Brian's fine contest >> James

Brandee Augustus

Date: 1/14/2010 12:46:00 PM

I totally and completely love your title! I'm also glad that a haiku got a placement in this contest. Congratulations!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/14/2010 8:58:00 AM

Interesting Haiku that you have composed. The color aquamarine is beautiful. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 1/14/2010 5:50:00 AM

Congratulations Shiki, on your success in Brian’s “Flow River, Flow” contest. Your poetic skills shine. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/12/2010 7:27:00 PM

congratulations on your win,Shiki!

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 1/12/2010 4:51:00 PM

congratulations Shiko on your win!-Robert

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/12/2010 9:36:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest, Shiki! Peace, Audrey

Joyce Johnson

Date: 1/12/2010 7:26:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with your lovely Haiku. Love, Joyce

Elaine George

Date: 1/12/2010 1:14:00 AM

How creative and imaginative. Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest with this delightful entry, Shiki.

Brian Strand

Date: 1/12/2010 12:32:00 AM

Congrats on your success in my contest Shiki.Rgds Brian.My latest contest RHYME TIME is now open

Brian Strand

Date: 1/8/2010 12:00:00 AM

Thank you for supporting my contest Shiki.Rgds Brian

Cherica Eckiwaudah

Date: 9/1/2009 4:30:00 PM

Nice Write, Loved It, Always Cherica Lynn <3

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/26/2009 8:05:00 PM

We're told all life sprang from the sea and this poem allows us to relive that birth. Beautiful haiku, Shiki! Love, Carolyn