Glass Candy

Slowly it slithers
Aquamarine tears appear
Nature's life begins
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Fraser Avatar
January 16, 2010 at 9:30 AM
Shiki, many congratulations on your win in Brian's fine contest >> James
Augustus Avatar
January 14, 2010 at 12:46 PM
I totally and completely love your title! I'm also glad that a haiku got a placement in this contest. Congratulations!
Kendrick Avatar
January 14, 2010 at 8:58 AM
Interesting Haiku that you have composed. The color aquamarine is beautiful. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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January 14, 2010 at 5:50 AM
Congratulations Shiki, on your success in Brian’s “Flow River, Flow” contest. Your poetic skills shine. Lovingly, Dane Ann
Dietrich Avatar
January 12, 2010 at 7:27 PM
congratulations on your win,Shiki!
Dufresne Avatar
January 12, 2010 at 4:51 PM
congratulations Shiko on your win!-Robert
Haick Avatar
January 12, 2010 at 9:36 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest, Shiki! Peace, Audrey
Johnson Avatar
January 12, 2010 at 7:26 AM
Congratulations on your win with your lovely Haiku. Love, Joyce
George   Avatar
January 12, 2010 at 1:14 AM
How creative and imaginative. Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest with this delightful entry, Shiki.
Strand Avatar
January 12, 2010 at 12:32 AM
Congrats on your success in my contest Shiki.Rgds Brian.My latest contest RHYME TIME is now open
Strand Avatar
January 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Shiki.Rgds Brian
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September 1, 2009 at 4:30 PM
Nice Write, Loved It, Always Cherica Lynn <3
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May 26, 2009 at 8:05 PM
We're told all life sprang from the sea and this poem allows us to relive that birth. Beautiful haiku, Shiki! Love, Carolyn
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