Glass

glass shatters into tiny shards, but so does a heart; it's just as brittle. isn't it a pity... that unlike glass, a heart hasn't... a "Handle With Care" disclaimer inscribed upon it? my friend, be gentle. do not drop! Writing Challenge - G words - Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France Date written: 02/22/2023

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Constance La France

Date: 3/2/2023 12:09:00 AM

Edward, a wonderful free verse poem and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - G Words, well done, blessings, Constance

Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/2/2023 8:16:00 PM

Thank you very much for the feedback, congrats and my placement, Constance:-) Most obliged.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/25/2023 11:28:00 AM

- Always ... "Handle With Care", Edward :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs

Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/2/2023 8:15:00 PM

Thank you very much, Anne-Lise:-)

Christuraj Alex

Date: 2/24/2023 7:44:00 PM

Great comparison of glass and heart. A beautiful short and sweet poem. Congratulations!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/2/2023 8:14:00 PM

Thank you so much, Christuraj:-)

Ann Peck

Date: 2/24/2023 3:50:00 PM

How beautiful, Edward. "Glass shatters into tiny shards, and so does a heart" Congratulations!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/2/2023 8:14:00 PM

Thank very much, Ann :-)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/24/2023 2:04:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful write and ending. Both will break so watch out. Have a great/blessed day writing away........................

Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/2/2023 8:14:00 PM

Thank you so much, Paula:-)