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Giving up the sauce

The whiskey on your breath could make a small boy dizzy I taste a liquor never brewed” Emily Dickinson's - The May Wine
I am asking my hands to stand their ground, vintage wine leaves my soul spellbound. I don't know where my lips are bound, my ears hear the glass clicking sound, I desire to run fast like a greyhound. Everyone is whispering loudly, I will come round, some of them don't know my liver disease background, since I started the sauce I’ve been living in a fantasy fairground, I can't seem to write anything poetic or profound, my pens are abandoned in my pity playground. In pursuit of clarity, I dream of the grapes underground. I still want them to swirl my tongue around, I loathe my sympathy party frown, once I fit in as the resident clown.

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Date: 12/31/2023 11:54:00 PM
Congrats. Thanks for sharing this. Joyous New year to you and your family. God bless you.
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Date: 12/31/2023 6:28:00 AM
Sabrina, congratulations on your win in my Funny New Years Resolutions contest, your poem was fun and I liked it a lot, Happy New Year, Constance
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Date: 12/19/2023 12:17:00 PM
You have a way with rhymes i see dear sabrina, i love this and flow of this.those festive days can be a bit too overwhelming in a world full of opinions! I love the ending the most and sincere voice of yours that can be heard through your well crafted words. If this is for a contest , wish you all the best
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