Giving Half Eleven a Try
Offshoot feelings pierce your abandoned heart song.
But you go along.
Pretending normal when you’re gasping for air.
As others don’t care.
You see him with her now, and her children two.
Soul ripping for you.
He’ll be back your traitorous heart says, a lie.
Who cares if you die?
Offshoot feelings pierce your abandoned heart song.
You know it is wrong.
It will not be long.
Written 10-28-2018 Contest: Half Eleven Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Nina Parmenter
Copyright © Caren Krutsinger | Year Posted 2018
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