Givers

They give you blood of their heart
And water of their life to make you rise to might
They shelter you with their shadows
From the shower of dangerous snakes and arrows

They stay awake all night when you are unwell
Pray to God to make you well
They make sure to give you meat
While they eat leaves, and so they repeat

They walk with the pace of your tiny feet
And shine with the melody of your every heart beat
All they do ___ is to think of you
All they want ___ is a successful You! 

You are their oxygen, and the sail of their boat
God bless these givers __God bless every parent

23rd sept. 2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 9/23/2022 7:52:00 PM
Just so touching! Thank you Pangie xx
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Date: 7/9/2021 1:57:00 PM
A sweet wonderful well-crafted tribute to parents who are the best givers. - Gail
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Date: 5/3/2021 8:29:00 AM
What a wonderful story/write. I Love It and your line, "God bless these givers __God bless every parent." It is a hard job. Have a blessed day.................
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 5/3/2021 8:57:00 AM
Indeed... Thanks
Date: 12/24/2020 8:42:00 AM
I do so absolutely agree with my friend Harry- "an amazing poem".. As a father myself, I see the beauty, truth and reality in this fine poem. We love our children more than we do ourselves. Which is as it was meant to be.. A fav.. God bless...
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 3/28/2021 1:29:00 PM
Indeed, parents devote their whole life to their kids, but unfortunately, only a few of them appreciate the sacrifices of their parents!
Date: 9/26/2020 11:08:00 PM
What an amazing poem, such power in your wonderful words. Going to my favourites...Keep Safe. Harry.
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 9/27/2020 6:41:00 AM
So kind of you Harry. Thank you
Date: 9/25/2020 3:01:00 AM
Your very beautiful and wonderful poetic words do honour not only every single parent but also every human being, worthy of the name, who rejoices in the beauty and fulfilling feel of the act of giving.. to give is to live.. A great pleasure to read so meaningful a work, Paghunda! My deepest regards and blessings to you.
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 9/27/2020 6:41:00 AM
Thank you Bisma for stopping by.
Date: 9/24/2020 6:58:00 PM
they are angels of mercy!
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 9/27/2020 6:40:00 AM
Indeed
Date: 9/24/2020 10:16:00 AM
I vote this the best Givers poem of all - wow my friend, this is poetic bliss to read. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 9/27/2020 6:39:00 AM
So kind of you... Thank you Jen
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