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Written on June 1, 2025

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on the surface, the waters are like glass, reflecting the rhythms of a promise, a prayer, a praise felt by the heart who breathes in her peace ~ by poet gently flowing across polished stones waters reflecting the silence of June her rolling sprays stir me in my bones as she sways beneath a blue moon on the surface, she seems to be drifting singing of a graceful dawn who hears realizing that the times are shifting and soon, she will silence all of my fears breaking through the hush of the night with her light laughter, her joyful surge rising on the brink of a moment so right when joy and hope, peace and love merge creating in me a soundless beauty, a stream of careless notions who form a quiet dream

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Date: 6/15/2025 4:37:00 PM
Ahhh!! I can feel the Spirit and the calm of the stream. What a creative winner you have in this one. I like the use of personification in it. So nice to see your name on the winners' list. Sara K
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