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Far back in the graveyard A chill was in the air Three Webster County girls were Playing “Truth or Dare” Sounds of restless spirits Echoed through the night A gust of wind extinguished All three lantern lights Visibility by a full moon Cast shadows everywhere Distant howls of coyotes Caused quite a scare Rustling leaves, swaying trees Only made things worse Three Webster County friends Huddled and tried not to curse An old Halloween custom Young kids eagerly tried To stay the graveyard ‘til midnight A passage of Webster County pride Thunder boomed, lightening flashed The girls shivered and cried Holding each other tightly They agreed to do it or die At sunrise the groundskeeper Started making rounds Behind a row of tombstones The friends were safely found Accepted now by older kids Their bravery not taunted The girls told stories of graveyard being haunted October 31st has changed a lot Is now a very different scene Still Webster folks tell the tale About the “Girls of Halloween”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/28/2020 1:16:00 AM
Very nicely written quatrains. I love a good scary tale.
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Date: 9/11/2018 8:25:00 PM
Congrats, Susan. I enjoyed your poem a lot.
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Date: 9/11/2018 7:47:00 PM
A little early for Halloween, but this timeless, spooky poem has a wonderful flow and storyline. I wonder if this was completely fiction or based on some actual 'legend'. Congratulations on rounding out the podium finishers in my contest!
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Date: 11/24/2015 8:08:00 AM
A dilightful tale you have weaved!
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Susan Gentry
Date: 12/9/2015 11:12:00 AM
Thanks Richard! Sorry didn't see this sooner.
Date: 10/31/2015 8:37:00 AM
Lovely Halloween memories Susan
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Susan Gentry
Date: 10/31/2015 3:23:00 PM
Thanks Tim! Glad you liked it. ~ Susan
Date: 10/31/2015 8:35:00 AM
Cute but scary halloween story.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 10/31/2015 3:22:00 PM
Thanks, John. First I've ever attempted like that. Was fun to do.
Date: 10/30/2015 11:03:00 PM
I enjoyed this poetic tale, Susan! Great rhymes and smooth flow. Love, Kim
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Susan Gentry
Date: 10/30/2015 11:27:00 PM
Thanks Kim! It was fun to do. ~ Susan

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