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Far back in the graveyard
A chill was in the air
Three Webster County girls were 
Playing “Truth or Dare”
 
Sounds of restless spirits
Echoed through the night
A gust of wind extinguished
All three lantern lights
 
Visibility by a full moon
Cast shadows everywhere
Distant howls of coyotes
Caused quite a scare
 
Rustling leaves, swaying trees
Only made things worse
Three Webster County friends
Huddled and tried not to curse
 
An old Halloween custom
Young kids eagerly tried
To stay the graveyard ‘til midnight
A passage of Webster County pride
 
Thunder boomed, lightening flashed
The girls shivered and cried
Holding each other tightly
They agreed to do it or die
 
At sunrise the groundskeeper 
Started making rounds
Behind a row of tombstones
The friends were safely found
 
Accepted now by older kids
Their bravery not taunted
The girls told stories of
graveyard being haunted

October 31st has changed a lot
Is now a very different scene
Still Webster folks tell the tale
About the “Girls of Halloween”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/28/2020 1:16:00 AM
Very nicely written quatrains. I love a good scary tale.
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Date: 9/11/2018 8:25:00 PM
Congrats, Susan. I enjoyed your poem a lot.
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Date: 9/11/2018 7:47:00 PM
A little early for Halloween, but this timeless, spooky poem has a wonderful flow and storyline. I wonder if this was completely fiction or based on some actual 'legend'. Congratulations on rounding out the podium finishers in my contest!
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Date: 11/24/2015 8:08:00 AM
A dilightful tale you have weaved!
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Susan Gentry
Date: 12/9/2015 11:12:00 AM
Thanks Richard! Sorry didn't see this sooner.
Date: 10/31/2015 8:37:00 AM
Lovely Halloween memories Susan
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Susan Gentry
Date: 10/31/2015 3:23:00 PM
Thanks Tim! Glad you liked it. ~ Susan
Date: 10/31/2015 8:35:00 AM
Cute but scary halloween story.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 10/31/2015 3:22:00 PM
Thanks, John. First I've ever attempted like that. Was fun to do.
Date: 10/30/2015 11:03:00 PM
I enjoyed this poetic tale, Susan! Great rhymes and smooth flow. Love, Kim
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Susan Gentry
Date: 10/30/2015 11:27:00 PM
Thanks Kim! It was fun to do. ~ Susan

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