Girl Up

in the middle of the night, 
i wake.
i see her crying
can tell she's broken,
why mourn!?
pitiful i am
for that skinny guy
chose his way already
why cry!?
remorseful he ain't
his cock crows anytime of day or night.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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March 20, 2010 at 5:05 AM
girl up and out of there
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