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Girl In the Mirror

GIRL IN THE MIRROR * Like a ship’s compass sits in the binnacle unmoving While the vessel rolls and pitches, As if her eyes and head were on separate swivel bearings She faced me as I spoke but the eyes rolled Magnetically to the mirror at her side, Assessing the exact shape and size Of all the important parts of her outline From all possible angles, all possible lighting, While making written notes of my instructions. And the pen moved unerringly across the paper, Quickly, error-free and blotless, yet unguided By eyes which were otherwise engaged: And she asked politely if that was all, and smiled At herself as she ushered me from the office, So she could confront her image more directly With her automatically-homing radar eyes : And get an exact bearing on her bows and stern. . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . NOTE *This shop girl in Moscow was much more interested in her own image in the mirror than in talking directly to my face.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/6/2012 9:51:00 PM
That was confusing from the first line. But reading the note was like turning on a lightbulb. I read it again and everything made sense. Excellent job. Rockman
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Date: 2/6/2012 3:47:00 PM
clever and entertaining! you made your point wonderfully!
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Date: 2/6/2012 3:25:00 PM
This is great. Good description! Thank you for sharing! oxox hugs Laila
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Date: 2/6/2012 1:44:00 PM
:) :) funny one,Sidney. (I have a morror poem to) - like youer`s alot...lol - Anne-Lise
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