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written  7/19/2023

Giraffe Dropped Down For the Splits

~Awkward Splits :~)

horse in stable laugh
even the cow and her calf
giraffe took half bow
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Kingston Avatar
August 9, 2023 at 11:50 AM
As she should! This made me smile, it was just so cute Bless the giraffe!
Daniel Avatar
July 29, 2023 at 7:38 AM
This is so much fun, Eve, really cool:)
Baker Avatar
July 20, 2023 at 3:39 PM
Fun Haiku, Eve. Thanks for the smile it brought to my face, my friend. Have a great weekend! Bill
Roper Avatar
July 20, 2023 at 4:09 PM
Thank you, Bill. :)
Rose  Avatar
July 20, 2023 at 2:47 PM
Hard to take a bow when your so tall, lol, getting creative here !
Roper Avatar
July 20, 2023 at 4:09 PM
I love the video of how it was trying to eat. Lots of hugs and love your way
Andresen Avatar
July 20, 2023 at 12:04 PM
... I tried to do like the giraffe ... help ... I can't get back up ... :) - I love this, Eve :) - hugs
Roper Avatar
July 20, 2023 at 4:08 PM
Well , there is no way i could now or when I was younger. Hugs my friend
Rodrigues Avatar
July 20, 2023 at 7:14 AM
LOL…love it…about an animal, even the human kind can be imagined. Really fun one, Eve!
Roper Avatar
July 20, 2023 at 4:07 PM
Thank you, kIm :)
Romios Avatar
July 20, 2023 at 5:00 AM
You humor and creativity are so apparent Eve! One of the the nicest things about you is that you are not a punishing poet. There are far too many here.. No poet here is a god… they think so, though! Grateful for your love and all your work. Pangie
Roper Avatar
July 20, 2023 at 4:07 PM
Awe, you are always so sweet my friend... lots of hugs and love your way
Dietrich Avatar
July 19, 2023 at 9:43 PM
that's so cute, Eve.
Roper Avatar
July 20, 2023 at 4:06 PM
Thank you, the inspiration came from Anaya, with here laughing horse video. :)
Rolland Avatar
July 19, 2023 at 9:41 PM
enjoyable reading, with fun, thanks for the giraffe
Roper Avatar
July 20, 2023 at 4:06 PM
Thank you, at least the giraffe tried :)
Anaya Avatar
July 19, 2023 at 9:19 PM
Haha, Eve I had no idea they were capable of the Chinese splits. I see your thoughts were on my laughing horses, lov it!
Roper Avatar
July 20, 2023 at 4:05 PM
Thank you, for the inspiration of this poem. :)
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