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Ginkgo's Fall Leaves

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I Thought there Were golden Leaves upon the Ground beneath my gold Ginkgo, alas~~ only Yellow frost bitten grass lies Left wet from yesterday's winter Rain, as the almost bare limbs shiver In the icy northwesterly brisk breeze I, also shiver inside our heated Home, stripped bare of youth, vitality In the winter of my short life Here on Jesus' created Earth, experiencing all His creation's joy Such a short time Just a drop Compared To Eternity The Book Of John 1st Chapter

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Kim Merryman

Date: 4/24/2021 4:37:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your reflective etheree, Sara! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/25/2021 3:26:00 AM

Kim, Your presence at my page is appreciated. Always enjoy seeing the congrats. Sara

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/24/2021 1:08:00 PM

Sara, this is a beautifully written double Etheree. The older we become the faster time seems to pass. Congratulations on your deserving win! Blessings xxo

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/24/2021 1:36:00 PM

Connie, Thanks so much for your visit and kind review with congrats. Sara

Jack Horne

Date: 1/2/2021 7:09:00 AM

beautiful & thought-provoking

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/25/2021 3:25:00 AM

Jack, Thanks for your understanding review and comment. Sara

Newton Ranaweera

Date: 12/24/2020 7:18:00 AM

A graceful write on eternity vs brevity of life!!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/23/2021 6:51:00 AM

Newton, Thank you so much for dropping by and taking time to comment on my work. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara

Jcb Brul

Date: 12/21/2020 8:24:00 PM

So uplifting! Our anxieties on earth are short compare to the life that God prepared for us ahead.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/22/2020 4:37:00 AM

JCB, Your comment is uplifting. Yes, it is hard to phantom forever with our human brain. Only God can understand eternity and little children. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/21/2020 1:09:00 PM

Your poem is very powerful, Sara. Many of us can relate to the sentiments on aging in the "short" lives we are given. The photo looks like a passageway, perhaps to a better life. Love the poem, especially the way you separated "to" and "Eternity." Hugs, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/21/2020 3:10:00 PM

Carolyn, Thanks for the visit. I appreciate the time spent here. Yes, our time here is short in comparison to eternity. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/21/2020 11:26:00 AM

So far so good. But to be continued? where, on another page? Great poetic power. ~~

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/21/2020 12:03:00 PM

Victor, Thanks for the nice review. I forgot to take off the not finished. I will have to fix that plus another mistake I see.