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They are mostly gone now....Men's Taverns...aka Gin Mills

GIN MILLS

Battered pay phones
hung on the walls
their rings
harsh reminders.
They sat,
ageing men,
hunched
on barstools
brooding faces
glaring into
sullen evidence
of reflected disdain.
Younger men stood
milling about
regaling each other
with exaggerated misdeeds.
The old payphone’s ring
coldly calling those
who were never there.
There was no “top” shelf,
only hard whiskey
for softened men.
Bent backs,
gnarled hands,
empty eyes,
lost in a liquored
loneliness.
Draft beer,
pickled eggs,
Slim Jims,
that damn phone
forever ringing
as they watched
the seasons change
through the dirty window
of death’s waiting room.


John G. Lawless
©5/14/2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/29/2017 1:37:00 PM
This is a sad poem,gloomy it is a good write.
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Date: 5/24/2017 10:48:00 AM
That is a great picture you paint for me there, sober and staccato sentences. In colours that slowly fade.
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Date: 5/22/2017 11:08:00 AM
Very cool my friend. I remember places like this back in New Jersey when I lived there a long time ago.
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