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Gin and Sin

Gin and Sin 


          I once stayed at grandiose inn,
          With rowdies, who reeked of gin!
          Their vulgar voices louder than tin.
          
          The worse thing in the world is sin.
          Nothing on earth,shall ever do me in.
          Protected by angels, from human vermin!


                           10/21/2022
           





                      Momorhyme by Pangie
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Mcconnell Avatar
October 29, 2022 at 8:09 AM
A poignant piece Pangie stands for what is right and true. I really like your consistent rhyme too. Blessings, Gordon
Baker Avatar
October 27, 2022 at 9:37 AM
Great way to look at life, Panagiota, live lone and enjoy life! Hugs, Bill
Romios Avatar
October 27, 2022 at 12:35 PM
Touché, my Texas compatriot. ))) Making life SANE in America is number one…for me.. I have outlived my friends! And wish a long life to all in a once again “civilized”USA. Where there is freedom from want and people go back to work. Above all, propoganda has to stop. Lying journalists-belong behind bars with crazed criminals amd members of Congress..pS..add Hunter to the list! Huggs, Pangie
Eagle Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 8:10 AM
A introspective poem for the day. I liked reading this one.
Romios Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 11:42 AM
There are people who support us. Then, the other kind…to destroy us! Seuriously, Elena! I bet you have met both kinds. The worst are pretend friends online or in life. Our Angels are by us forever. They never leave! People do! Huggs, Pangie
Roper Avatar
October 21, 2022 at 8:06 AM
Protected by angels, from human vermin! a prayer I say almost every night for my children and grandchildren. Hope you are well
Romios Avatar
October 21, 2022 at 10:19 AM
Eve, so glad you pray for all your family, what a beautiful thing. Angels are there, always…sure, some do not believe in them. It does not matter. They do not need human recognition to exist. I am doing well, grandson on the honor roll. Cheers! Glad he is in a religious HS. Besides baseball, he loves the Bible! Huggs, Pangie.
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October 21, 2022 at 7:07 AM
Alcohol will ruin the health of a person. I only allow myself a small glass of red wine at lunch. No more though. Lovely monorhyme.
Romios Avatar
October 21, 2022 at 10:12 AM
Three cheers for you Victor! You take great care of yourself! Good ging! And thank you for the positive comment, You make me smile! Huggs, Pangie Huggs Pangie
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