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Gimme Shelter

A strong hurricane blows across the beach My umbrella turns inside-out; I screech! Broadcasting from a cell phone Rain pelts and there’s no tone For the first time I’m at a loss for speech

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/4/2014 8:24:00 PM
Cute limerick, Carolyn! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 4/3/2014 2:05:00 AM
Different approach but it works. Congrats Ron
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Date: 4/3/2014 2:01:00 AM
My congratulations for writing this lovely poem, enjoyed it, carolyn
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Date: 4/2/2014 6:41:00 PM
Congrats, Carolyn. Happy that you are posting again!!
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Date: 4/2/2014 3:11:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!! Sara
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Date: 4/2/2014 11:47:00 AM
Smiling..both at your win and at seeing you posting again. HOpe all is well..Let me know. LNC
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Date: 4/2/2014 11:38:00 AM
- Hey Carolyn - Congratulations on your win in "Umbrella" contest Sponsor Leonora Galinta - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/2/2014 11:35:00 AM
Carolyn, wow.. Unique take to the contest. I like it.. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 4/2/2014 10:19:00 AM
My warm and hearty congratulations on this brilliant piece and win my dear friend Carolyn! Thank u so much for your loving support. More blessings! Biggest hugs! Love lots always, Leonora
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Date: 4/1/2014 6:52:00 AM
This is a brilliant Limerick my friend! You have delighted me by the splendor of this incredible poem here this morning! What a fantastic piece, quite the enlightening poem, Great Work!!
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