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Giggles and Dust Rise

Cool raindrops kiss my cheeks A warm breeze rises within me As I recall the moments Which linger in my heart forever The pulsating sphere of light and dark Polar opposite lovers in the circle of life Encompassing magnificent visceral nuances Infinite shades of gray, slate, and steel With mauve interludes An elegant intimate tapestry Complete with tears of joy and pain Sharing love and grief Gazing upwards I join my brothers and sisters On jagged bare branches As cool wind rustles our feathers The white hawks, eagles, vultures, and their tribes The birds of prey who gather Sharing tales of their journeys through time We all stare out Our senses prickling with anticipation A silence hovers A shared glimpse A collective inhale Our ears and hearts awaken Virgin raindrops fall on thirsty ferns Their limey tendrils outstretched Quenched in gratitude A low rumble Footsteps below A clearing in the forest Created by children gathering Giggles and dust rise Excited young mouths Speaking in pantomime Gesturing with kind intentions Young creatures of the world kingdom Unconcerned with language barriers Sharing evolving consciousness A wink of an eye Hands on chest - feeling our heartbeats Laughter emanating from within little bellies Spinning freely in circles Arms outstretched wide, heart open and exposed Vulnerable in delight and anticipation A low cello vibrates nearby A gentle breeze rustles leaves Which float in the air embracing light rays Mesmerizing all Pine boughs perform shadow puppet dances On cascading rock walls nearby Elders lean contently against tree trunks Smiles slowly emerging as silent tears flow A young child skips over Tenderly grabbing her grandfather’s arm Opening his hand, she plants a wet kiss On his age-stained palm Then gazes up at his toothy grin Before returning to the gathering Wild beasts arrive and quiet Kneeling by water’s edge To drink and watch Hands clasp A sharing ensues A vibration rises As souls gather Radiating light and hope to all

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Date: 7/23/2023 11:06:00 AM
My friend, this truly is an outstanding poem. Great flow, masterful imagery and such positive verses as to bring joy to the reader! Tells us life can be beautiful and very fulfilling .All we have to do is--truly-- open our eyes and listen to our heart and soul. Somehow we seem to forget as we transfer into our adulthood. Another gem, another fav. God bless. YDD
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Susan Lawrence
Date: 7/31/2023 6:30:00 PM
Dear friend Robert, Humbled by your comments. I am so happy you found this joyful. That brings a smile to my face . It’s possible to have fulfillment and see the beauty in life . We have to listen and open our heart and soul to the magic. Enjoying simple pleasures and the gift of giving helps as well ! Blessings and thank you for the Fav . Susan :)
Date: 5/3/2023 4:12:00 AM
Belated congratulations on your POTD, exceptional poetry dear Susan, hugs Jan x
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Date: 5/7/2023 11:37:00 AM
Thank you dear Jan ! So happy to have your wit and humor and heart and presence back on Soup ! Big hugs, Susan :)
Date: 4/6/2023 9:08:00 AM
I had to answer a 2nd time, there is another stanza I could herald as a memory spinner, but we all know how wonderful this write is Susan, Kudos. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 4/13/2023 8:41:00 AM
Hugs dear Jen .
Date: 4/6/2023 9:03:00 AM
A young child skips over, Tenderly grabbing her grandfathers arm, Opening his hand she plants a wet kiss. l loved these few lines because: they remind me of my grandfather, when i was six we spent 2 months in Greece before immigrating to Africa,my grandfather kept the hand made childish decorations I made till Easter, our relationship continued, he was my mentor, have posted two or three of his poems to me, spent my 21st in Greece at his home. Thank-you for memories you brought back. Hugs, Jen.
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Date: 4/13/2023 8:40:00 AM
Thank you dear Jen ! So happy this brought back happy memories for you . Big hugs and blessings, Susan :) Your grandfather sounds like such an amazing man and your bond magical and precious. What a gift for both of you . Xx
Date: 3/28/2023 10:35:00 AM
i love your last stanza - it encompasses all you write above it - a sharing between all, their hands clasped whilst a vibration arises radiating light and hope to the souls that gather there - even the wild beasts quietly gather and kneel by the waters edge mesmerized as they watch and drink. You are one of my favorite poets on Soup Susan! Love and hugs Jennifer.
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Date: 3/30/2023 4:19:00 PM
Oh Jennifer ! Your words bring a smile to my face ! I so appreciate your visit and wonderful heartfelt comments. I am so delighted with your presence and insight . Love and hugs right back to you ! Susan :)
Date: 2/20/2023 11:39:00 AM
what can i say more than another breathtaking visual provided by Susan...admirable talent that is adorable...
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Date: 3/4/2023 3:01:00 PM
Dear Timothy ! You make me smile . Thank you thank you. Big hugs , Susan :)
Date: 2/13/2023 5:24:00 AM
A classic & elegant description of the scene, i read with close interest, because i try to be a bird artist, 2-Dand esp. love to embroider them, which is delicate work,. Falcons my faves to draw,Finches faves to thread. Here U seem to embroider this scene. Now a follower.
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Date: 2/14/2023 6:32:00 AM
Hi dear Sally ! How wonderful to read Your comments. I love the thought of you embroidering and drawing birds of prey, and Finches too ! Wonderful imagery . Thank you for your follow and presence ! Susan :)
Date: 2/12/2023 2:19:00 PM
Dynamic imagery in this penning; it's uplifting and a beautiful read.
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Date: 2/14/2023 6:29:00 AM
Hi M.L. Thank you for your visit and lovely comments. I appreciate your presence ! Susan :)
Date: 2/7/2023 3:17:00 PM
Dear Susan, The love and togetherness in this poem is beautiful. "Pine boughs perform shadow puppet dances on cascading rock walls nearby..." I love this! So many lovely words and phrases. My best to you, dear friend!
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Date: 2/10/2023 6:24:00 AM
Dear Ann , So wonderful to have you visit and thrilled by your comments . You have a big heart and a radiant soul . Big hugs, Susan :)
Date: 2/5/2023 6:56:00 PM
This is stunning! I love it and fave it :)
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Date: 2/6/2023 9:09:00 AM
Dear Fin . So nice to see you here ! In gratitude for your visit and comments and honored by your fave ! Cheers, Susan :)
Date: 1/31/2023 9:15:00 PM
Oh i feel so privileged to have read this, in fact Susan, to have read you at all, Poetry is the end tool, of a special mind, you even surpass that. POTD, and deserved too.
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Date: 2/6/2023 9:08:00 AM
Oh Harry , I am so very happy to see you here again ! So very happy you have been writing and sharing your heart with us . I am happy you are feeling well enough to do so . Your comments humble me and I take them in with gratitude. Thank you for the gift of you . Hugs and continued good health , Susan :)
Date: 1/31/2023 8:09:00 PM
Susan I do not know how I missed this one from you. Just a splendid creative piece that has your signature all over it. Your metaphors are unique and paint a picture only you can. A belated congratulations for POTD. Love reading your poetry it is always refreshing and unique... Blessings to you my Dear...
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Date: 2/6/2023 9:06:00 AM
Dear Michael . A belated thank you for your visit and lovely comments. It’s such a gift to have you along for the ride we take together through words, emotions and life . Blessings to you , Susan :)
Date: 1/30/2023 10:32:00 PM
Dearest Susan, what a joy it always is to sit down and soak in your soulful words, always so intertwined with humanity and connected to nature. Your ideals of peace, harmony, and togetherness are worthy of deep pondering and emulation. I love the lines "A shared glimpse A collective inhale Our ears and hearts awaken" and "Young creatures of the world kingdom Unconcerned with language barriers" as well as the sweet interchange between granddaughter and grandfather. Congrats on your POTD! Hugs ~ John
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Date: 2/6/2023 9:05:00 AM
Thank you dear John . Your presence is so appreciated and welcome . I love your interpretation and company on this journey we take together through poetry and life . In gratitude. Hugs and blessings, Susan :)
Date: 1/29/2023 5:38:00 AM
This is so, so good, Susan. I love it.. and a Fav! Belated Congrats on POTD. Also, wishing you a very Happy Birthday! Love & hugs... Charlie
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Date: 1/29/2023 7:50:00 AM
Dearest Charlie , In gratitude for your comments and honored by your fav ! Thank you for my Birthday wishes . Yay! So kind . XO Susan :)
Date: 1/28/2023 6:15:00 AM
Congratulations Miss Susan! :)
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Date: 1/28/2023 10:37:00 AM
Thank you Clifford !
Date: 1/27/2023 8:50:00 PM
Lovely images, Susan! Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 1/28/2023 10:37:00 AM
Thank you dear Kim ! Happy Saturday. Hugs, Susan :)
Date: 1/26/2023 1:39:00 AM
Ahh!! I enjoyed reading this one. It seems like a very serene place, but we all know in nature it is never serene for the animals. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page with congratulations. Sara
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Date: 1/27/2023 2:07:00 PM
Hi Sara, Thank you for your visit and comments. Yes the animal kingdom is not always serene. I have witnessed moments in time like the one in the poem where there is a pause.. a gathering and all is still and peaceful at least for awhile. Susan :)
Date: 1/25/2023 5:36:00 PM
Dearest Susan, my poetic soul sister, I am ever gratified to be held in the radiant light and embracing spirit of your poem celebrating the unity of generations, Nature and mystical beings. Your soul has traversed through time on astral and earthly planes to gather beauty to spill on the poetic page like "Virgin raindrops fall on thirsty ferns" - each and every verse is a exquisite facet in this incredible gem. Congratulations for your wonderful and worthy recognition with POTD honors. Your mesmerizing imagery brings me to "A clearing in the forest" where "giggles and dust rise" and I want to stay forever. Warmest wishes and hugs sailing on white wings.. ~Susan
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Date: 1/27/2023 2:05:00 PM
Dearest Susan...your comments overwhelm me with open arms and heart and tenderness coupled with your amazing mystical insight. We have traveled together before, and we will again.. in time and space and words.The journeys unfolding with elegance, love, passion, and deep reverence for our planet and the wonderful life that is here to be shared by all. Thank you for your presence. Thank you for you...in all of your many beautiful forms and finally thank you for being such an inspiration to me. Love to you sent on the whisper of white wings, Susan :)
Date: 1/25/2023 7:09:00 AM
Agree with comments Susan! Enchanted!
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Date: 1/27/2023 1:59:00 PM
James ...Thank you ! Hugs and all the best ! Susan :)
Date: 1/25/2023 6:57:00 AM
Congratulations on p.o.t.d. award, dear Susan! Once again you captivate with striking imagery and appeal to emotions. What I find very impressive is the reference to the children who one day will inherit what we leave behind, hopefully something which they'll be grateful for. The child and her grandfather ... the passing of the baton from the present generations to the next. ~ Warm regards and hugs, my friend // paul
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Date: 1/27/2023 1:57:00 PM
Hi dear Paul, In gratitude for your visit, comments, insight and friendship. I am so happy this poem moved you. Yes, the children are the keepers of the future. Their presence is precious and critical for our dear earth and mother nature. Big hugs to you and all good wishes . Susan :)
Date: 1/24/2023 2:55:00 PM
Another feel good uplifting POTD, from you Susan, has that mysterious tribal at one with nature vibe throughout, you’re certainly blessed with positivity, where’d you find it all, don’t answer that question people might try bottle it up and sell it on Amazon, congratulations cheers David
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Date: 1/27/2023 1:52:00 PM
Hi David. I love your comments and your perspective ! I won't answer that question ...I will keep staying in the positive realm though. All the best and thank you for your presence and congratulations. Cheers, susan :)
Date: 1/24/2023 8:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your most excellent POTD, Susan. I loved the colors and the descriptive imagery. You offered hope and touched me as your words radiated with my emotions and my soul. Enjoy your special day my dear friend. Bill
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Date: 1/24/2023 1:31:00 PM
Dearest Bill, Your comments humble me. I am so happy my poem touched you the way it did. That makes me smile.Big hugs and blessings sent to you, Susan :)
Date: 1/24/2023 1:06:00 AM
Back with big congratulations on your potd honor dearest Susan... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Date: 1/24/2023 1:30:00 PM
Love you Ani..Thank you for your return visit. Big hugs dear one, Susan :)
Date: 1/23/2023 7:21:00 PM
"Hands clasp, radiating light and hope to all." Such a beautiful moment. I'm visualizing togetherness, being united, instead of being divided. This applies to the animal kingdom as well. This is uplifting and spiritual, all at the same time. My heart is smiling. Congratulations Susan, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 1/24/2023 1:29:00 PM
Dear Brandy, You have such a way with words that flows peacefully. I love reading your work. Thank you for your visit and lovely comments. Big hugs and blessings to you, Susan :)Yes and visualizing togetherness is what its all about ! x
Date: 1/23/2023 6:48:00 PM
Once more back to your poem with Congratulations on your well deserved POTD, dear Susan....
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Date: 1/24/2023 1:27:00 PM
Big hugs Valsa...Thank you dear one . I appreciate you . Susan:)
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