Gifts We'Ve Been Given

We take so much for granted in our lives
Worth decreed in monetary measure
And worthiness is for what mankind strives
Overlooking more obvious treasure

To seek a vision we were given sight
Ears to hear the plaintiff plea of brother
Consciousness to realize wrong from right
Arms to wrap our love around each other

Hearts to beat for the many forms of life
Mouths to sip the milk of human kindness
Two feet to walk away from hint of strife
A brain to outwit bigoted blindness

And we were given a strong writing hand
That through our written words some understand









for contest "Shakespearean or English Sonnet"

sponsored by John Freeman
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Muzzey Avatar
October 30, 2010 at 8:27 AM
Congratulations on your second place win with this wonderful Sonnet. Caryl
Kendrick Avatar
October 28, 2010 at 3:54 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 3:21 PM
I love the third stanza and how you discussed the main parts of the body as our gifts .Congrats on this great win. LUv, Andrea
Guzzi Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 3:16 PM
Excellent moral message congrad's. Light & Love
Brown Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 10:56 AM
Congratulations Deb on your win in John Freeman's Sonnet contest. Love, Carol
K. Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 10:12 AM
Definitely like the strong message you say here, Barbara-- we really must make use of these gifts to their full extent-- super congrats on your win :)-- nikko :)
Gorelick Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 7:03 AM
Oh Deb, this one is such a strong piece..I especially like the ending. Congrats on your wonderful success...BG
Horsman Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 12:07 AM
wonderful Deb, congrats on your win. Harry
Mannan Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 8:47 PM
A beautiful Sonnet Deb. many congratulations on this win.
Mehta Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 6:13 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Deb
Devonshire Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 5:47 PM
Deb, I knew John would love this sonnet. Congratulations on your big win! Love, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 5:28 PM
Congrats Deb on your super win in John's contest luv.. an enjoyable entry .. more sweet success tonight for u my friend.. wonderful luv..enjoy..
Johnson Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 5:21 PM
And you are making good use of that gift with this lovely prize winning poem. Congratulations. Love, J0yce
Freeman Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 4:53 PM
Jolly good show Deb! Congratulations on a very deserving poem of it placement. Agape, Moses
Chappell Avatar
October 16, 2010 at 5:05 AM
a wonderful peace here again my friend thank you for sharing duncan
Mehta Avatar
October 12, 2010 at 9:17 AM
A very powerful and impressive sonnet on the theme of gifts that have been given, Deb
Devonshire Avatar
October 12, 2010 at 8:18 AM
Oh yes, we really do take our blessings for granted sometimes, Deb. It is only when we're about to lose them that we sense their worth. Excellent entry for the contest. John will love the depth in this message! Love, Carolyn
Neels Avatar
October 12, 2010 at 6:39 AM
Beautiful message you have here Deb, wishing you all the best with John's contest :) Wilma
Horsman Avatar
October 12, 2010 at 6:25 AM
beautiful form beautiful poem. love and enjoyed reading. Harry
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