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Gifts We'Ve Been Given

We take so much for granted in our lives Worth decreed in monetary measure And worthiness is for what mankind strives Overlooking more obvious treasure To seek a vision we were given sight Ears to hear the plaintiff plea of brother Consciousness to realize wrong from right Arms to wrap our love around each other Hearts to beat for the many forms of life Mouths to sip the milk of human kindness Two feet to walk away from hint of strife A brain to outwit bigoted blindness And we were given a strong writing hand That through our written words some understand for contest "Shakespearean or English Sonnet" sponsored by John Freeman

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Date: 10/30/2010 8:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your second place win with this wonderful Sonnet. Caryl
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Date: 10/28/2010 3:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 10/27/2010 3:21:00 PM
I love the third stanza and how you discussed the main parts of the body as our gifts .Congrats on this great win. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 10/27/2010 3:16:00 PM
Excellent moral message congrad's. Light & Love
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Date: 10/27/2010 10:56:00 AM
Congratulations Deb on your win in John Freeman's Sonnet contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/27/2010 10:12:00 AM
Definitely like the strong message you say here, Barbara-- we really must make use of these gifts to their full extent-- super congrats on your win :)-- nikko :)
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Date: 10/27/2010 7:03:00 AM
Oh Deb, this one is such a strong piece..I especially like the ending. Congrats on your wonderful success...BG
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Date: 10/27/2010 12:07:00 AM
wonderful Deb, congrats on your win. Harry
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Date: 10/26/2010 8:47:00 PM
A beautiful Sonnet Deb. many congratulations on this win.
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Date: 10/26/2010 6:13:00 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Deb
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Date: 10/26/2010 5:47:00 PM
Deb, I knew John would love this sonnet. Congratulations on your big win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/26/2010 5:28:00 PM
Congrats Deb on your super win in John's contest luv.. an enjoyable entry .. more sweet success tonight for u my friend.. wonderful luv..enjoy..
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Date: 10/26/2010 5:21:00 PM
And you are making good use of that gift with this lovely prize winning poem. Congratulations. Love, J0yce
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Date: 10/26/2010 4:53:00 PM
Jolly good show Deb! Congratulations on a very deserving poem of it placement. Agape, Moses
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Date: 10/16/2010 5:05:00 AM
a wonderful peace here again my friend thank you for sharing duncan
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Date: 10/12/2010 9:17:00 AM
A very powerful and impressive sonnet on the theme of gifts that have been given, Deb
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Date: 10/12/2010 8:18:00 AM
Oh yes, we really do take our blessings for granted sometimes, Deb. It is only when we're about to lose them that we sense their worth. Excellent entry for the contest. John will love the depth in this message! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/12/2010 6:39:00 AM
Beautiful message you have here Deb, wishing you all the best with John's contest :) Wilma
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Date: 10/12/2010 6:25:00 AM
beautiful form beautiful poem. love and enjoyed reading. Harry
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