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Nascent pristine morning awakens charisma, curtains of anxieties pulled aside-- oh look they reveal! A whitewashed wall proudly flaunting the crayon drawing, my daughter's innocent fantasies when she was nine. Windows of paraphernalia bask in golden glory, transparent dew drops gleaming with reflections dance to symphonies of swaying exuberant leaves to release an effervescence of aged promises I'd made. Ah! She stands embracing her blue dress, a friend strolling in orchards of timeless gifts, wish I'd watched her growing up with my own eyes. Alas! I wept in swamps of lost blank years recounting imaginations from perturbed oceans of scars, cluttered hopes against void realities. I shiver, frayed hallucinations no longer exist, bliss blooms in my hazy valley of ancient sorrow, parallel waves in hues of forgotten mauve dusk, surrender to the crests and troughs of merging waves as they spill pearls of visions from silver seashells, my dreams flutter with seagulls to fly afar, enchanted by the marvels of Aurora I cry, haunting blackness rolls down with tears unveils memories I'd preserved in oceans for years. The woman next to me embraces me with love, together all this time, yet a newfound daisy for me, shimmering in radiant blue, she appears to be my wife dancing to simmering joy, an angel in mists of dripping life. Musk-soaked fir tree gleams my grey imaginations, she descends dressed in her satin wedding gown tonight, wrapped in starry blanket we could oscillate with galaxies colliding under the celestial shades of moonlit sky. Multitudes pour from the corners of my eyes, rosy memoirs commemorating this heavenly jubilation, reminiscing more such nights spent by her side when I'd heard her whispers painting them to me. The impressions of my long lived blank memories fade in turning pages of forgotten cobwebs, my gifted eyes captivated by the mystical dance of my fingers tracing azure fantasies in wind, had I anticipated to take this glimpse in the end! Elated to awaken this obliterated gift of windows, I fly with visions and marvels to remember in colors, my senses at last, accept the abundance of eyesight, never too late to plunge myself in this dissolving cosmos, I wake up in heaven watching my loved ones in a gifted light. May 18, 2020 Gifts Poetry Contest Sponsor: Anthony Biaanco ~Premiere Contest Winner: 4th Place BRIAN'S CHOICE K,any form,any theme Poetry Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand ~Winner: Honorable Mention

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Date: 6/27/2020 1:03:00 PM
Congrats on your win and another great work. Excellent poem!
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/28/2020 1:54:00 PM
Thank you for such encouraging words Krish! :)
Date: 6/22/2020 9:27:00 AM
Congratulations Aditi. Nicely penned
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/22/2020 10:05:00 AM
Thank you for your kind wishes dear Jeanne. God bless you. Much love :)
Date: 6/22/2020 4:58:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, and for sharing your gift of poetry. God bless you.
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/22/2020 9:08:00 AM
Glad you love my words Beata. Thank you for your appreciation. Blessings and love :)
Date: 6/21/2020 6:48:00 PM
Lovely Aditi. Congratulations.
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Date: 6/22/2020 9:08:00 AM
Thank you for your kind wishes Sam. Blessings :)
Date: 6/21/2020 10:27:00 AM
Aditi, your words are so inspiring and poetic. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/22/2020 9:08:00 AM
Glad you love my words Eve. Thank you for your kind wishes. Blessings and love :)
Date: 6/21/2020 4:41:00 AM
Aditi, congratulations for a fine gifted muse. Mohan
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/22/2020 9:07:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words of appreciation Mohan :)
Date: 6/21/2020 3:58:00 AM
Such a powerful imagination and command of the language in poetic torrents, Aditi. These seems to describe some kind of awakening or new vision or awakening in the afterlife. It's magical and so filled with joy. "Accept the abundance of eyesight". What a wonderful journey this poem takes us on! Hearty congratulations for your contest win, my friend ~ John
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Date: 6/22/2020 9:07:00 AM
I am glad you pointed out the interpretations at the end John. Glad you love my words and reflect upon them. Thank you for being such a generous support system. God bless you dear friend :)
Date: 5/19/2020 9:14:00 PM
Gorgeousl penned. Your writing has a mystical quality.
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/19/2020 10:25:00 PM
Thanks for the encouragement and love Caren :)
Date: 5/19/2020 7:08:00 AM
Hi , it's a beautiful poem with poetic diction. I like these kind of blended poem's filled with memories. Multiple interpretations can be done by the readers.Well done.:-) My best wishes for all your works.:-) Take care~Deepa
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/22/2020 9:05:00 AM
Thank you dear Deepa. Love :)
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Date: 6/22/2020 5:25:00 AM
Back to you with congratulations dear aditi mam:-)KEEP WRITING!!! Take care.Much love:-)
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Date: 5/19/2020 8:52:00 AM
It is my pleasure that you enjoyed reading and interpreting it. Thank you so much for your blessings Deepa :)
Date: 5/18/2020 4:59:00 PM
Wow... You really are a fantastic poet... At first I thought this was a personal account, but it does not seem so... A sad story written so poetically... This person regained their eyesight?
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Date: 5/19/2020 3:09:00 AM
It is fiction. I just wanted to write something that expressed enormous joy that overshadowed a tinge of sadness together. It can have multiple interpretations, either the person regained eyesight or he was able to see everything through his awakened memories and imaginations or he finally met his maker and rejoiced to see everything.

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