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Gift of Recovery

She'd been been beaten, pushed around and abandoned like trash without a collar around her neck she was a dog with no name Dogtrotting slowly behind the back street she licked at her rash until a sweet woman appeared, looking ill and riddled with pain; two birds of one feather tethered * together trumping bad weather Out of the cold she was brought and given a morsel to eat she bathed her slowly and gave her, her very own name The fire was hot and the hearth was real warm at her feet she sang her a song that made her forget all the pain. gift of recovery given for free gabbing with glee She barked with joy and her eyes shone like diamonds at night "Daisy" was finally home and with a master as kind as can be She now had a collar and someone who treated her right, never again was she hurt she was happy and finally carefree.

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Date: 10/29/2024 3:21:00 PM
Hellpo Mystic Rose, Rose, i am so glad the dog has gotten a new home to be loved and safe. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/29/2024 3:56:00 PM
Hello Mystic Rose, Rose, yes they deserve to be loved. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 10/29/2024 3:52:00 PM
I am too, they deserve to be loved Darlene
Date: 10/29/2024 9:09:00 AM
Dear Mystic, your compassion is to be praised.
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Date: 10/29/2024 2:19:00 PM
Animals are most kind to us whey don't we do the same for them, thanks for reading Victor !
Date: 10/29/2024 8:18:00 AM
To be loved and a warm hearth. Who could as for more? Perfect write.
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 10/29/2024 2:18:00 PM
Thanks Joe, so many don't treat their pets right, they all deserve to be treated with respect. and love.
Date: 10/29/2024 5:24:00 AM
very touching portrait , is this an animal, bird, cat, dog ?, it means a lot for being a better person, have a nice day poet
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 10/29/2024 2:18:00 PM
its a dog, Yann, thanks for reading
Date: 10/29/2024 5:23:00 AM
What a wonderful idea and brilliant take on the contest prompt! You are sure to do well with this wonderful work of art!
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 10/29/2024 2:17:00 PM
Thank you Karen God bless your beautiful heart

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