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frantic search for rose no breeze tweets red roses' smell ~ heart flirts at her feet Syllabic count: 5/7/5 A 5th place in the following contest Jan. 5, 2021 A Valentine's Senryu Poetry Contest Tania Kitchin

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Eve Roper

Date: 2/11/2021 8:33:00 PM

This is so good, Newton, congratulations on your win. Eve

Newton Ranaweera
Date: 2/12/2021 5:38:00 AM

Thank you so much, Eve, for the lovely comment and the congrats!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/11/2021 5:12:00 PM

sweet ee sounds in that middle line! Big congrats on the winners' list, Newton

Newton Ranaweera
Date: 2/12/2021 5:38:00 AM

Thank you so much, Andrea, for sweet comment and the congrats!!

Tania Kitchin

Date: 2/10/2021 2:13:00 PM

Newton, congratulations on your winning placement with your fun poem!

Newton Ranaweera
Date: 2/12/2021 5:37:00 AM

Thank you so much, Tania, for the comment and the congrats!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/10/2021 11:16:00 AM

Creative work. Congrats on this winner. Sara

Newton Ranaweera
Date: 2/10/2021 2:08:00 PM

Thank you so much, Sara, for this lovely comment and congrats!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/10/2021 10:58:00 AM

- Congratulations so much on your great winning poem, Newton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Newton Ranaweera
Date: 2/10/2021 2:08:00 PM

Thank you so much for the great comment and the congrats, Anne-Lise!!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 2/10/2021 6:39:00 AM

Ni Newton! Congratulations on the win! Linda

Newton Ranaweera
Date: 2/10/2021 2:09:00 PM

Thank you so much, Linda, for the congrats!!