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Giants Through the Hour Glass

giants through the hour glass stride leviathan upon the hissing seeds of mountains curl toes, summer freed, about the pillars of the world whose molten bloom faded millennia ago and crumbled down to dust. upon these ancient shores ponder as you brush aside these clinging crumbs of mighty crags once, a time ago we were almost dust and they were giants.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 10/10/2017 1:57:00 PM
Masterclass Patricia. I love this one
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/11/2017 8:59:00 PM
Jannie you are so thoughtful in your commenting thank you.
Date: 9/22/2017 4:03:00 AM
What a fabulous and intrinsic write my friend! I surely enjoyed reading your amazing poem here this morning! You have made me smile by your creativity within this glorious piece! I am impressed Patricia! Great Work!!
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/22/2017 11:38:00 AM
Thank you Russell.
Date: 9/21/2017 10:00:00 PM
"whose molten bloom faded millennia ago and crumbled down to dust" spectacular, all of it, but I'm rolling in this line :)
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 9/22/2017 8:11:00 AM
Thou crackest me up :)
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/21/2017 10:40:00 PM
Hey you will get all dusty and you never know who you may pick up. lol lol

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