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Giant Sunflowers -Lune-

Giant sunflowers dance under the warm summer sun. Copyright Cynthia Jones May.1/2006

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Cona Adams

Date: 1/23/2015 6:51:00 AM

Very nice, Cynthia. And, your form is Haiku. Modern Haiku experts say that seventeen syllables are not required to qualify, You may use "up to" 17. Take off the punctuation, and you have a great Haiku poem.

Cynthia Jones
Date: 2/14/2015 6:14:00 PM

Hello Cona. This is a Lune. I look up different types of poetry and try my hand at them. :O) Although...I could turn it into a Haiku, but I'll just leave this as is. Thank you so very much for stopping by to have a read and leave a comment. I truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/16/2015 8:23:00 AM

Sunflowers make me smile. I enjoyed your poem and Jan's this morning. Thanks for adding to my good mood. If you remove the capitalization and period you could list this under Haiku.

Cynthia Jones
Date: 2/14/2015 6:16:00 PM

Same here Richard. :O) I can't wait for Spring, so I can plant more seeds. I've read hers as well. She left me a gift in my Poetry Soup inbox, that I truly enjoyed. You are most welcome. :O) Nah. I'll just leave this as is. Thank you so very much for stopping by to have a read and leave a comment. I truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia

Jan Allison

Date: 1/16/2015 7:49:00 AM

Oh we are both posting sunny poems today - I love seeing sunflowers they always make me smile when i see them - lovely write:-) Hugs Jan xx You could extend line 2 and make it a haiku:-)

Cynthia Jones
Date: 2/4/2015 9:28:00 AM

Sorry this reply is so late Jan. I'm trying my best to catch up. LOL I've read yours as well. So do I. I think I'm just going to leave as is. Oh, thanks for the gift. :O) I appreciate it. Thank you so very much for taking the time to stop by to have a read and leave a comment. I truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia