Ghoulish Night

a world of ghoulish white blocks my nightly meander moon made shadows claws and scrap hold my lifeless heart

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Date: 9/25/2011 11:23:00 PM

GREAT dodoitsu, Deb. and I see you won in the contest too!!! congratulations.

Date: 9/25/2011 12:06:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the contest of Tracie "Dodoitsu Darkness" Debbie. Love, Carol

Date: 9/23/2011 2:21:00 PM

Congrats on your win..Sara

Date: 9/22/2011 5:06:00 PM

Congrats Debbie on a super fantastic second place win with excellent entry luv..

Date: 9/22/2011 4:33:00 AM

Conmgratulations on the win in the contest of tracie,Debbie

Date: 9/20/2011 5:26:00 PM

wonderful write Debbie..very creepy....thanks for sharing

Date: 9/18/2011 10:53:00 PM

It's dark and scaring night,Debie.You have penned so nicely.With love,FABIYAS

Date: 9/18/2011 6:46:00 PM

What a wonderful write Debbie! I really enjoyed this illustrious poem!! Awesome work!!

Date: 9/18/2011 6:19:00 PM

Ohhhh, creepy! I love it.BG