Ghosts

Why should pain be so blue? My face has turned a whitish hue! Maybe I'm afraid of living Sure doesn't seem my heart's been giving!

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Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 9/20/2009 9:53:00 AM

Hang in there, it does get better! Thank you for your recent comments also. ~Trudy~

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/18/2009 11:30:00 AM

I have read your poetry and enjoyed it. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors. You have done an excellent job writing this poem. May you have a wonderful and inspiring weekend Joshua. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/17/2009 12:50:00 PM

Nicely done Metaphoric Quatrain. Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/17/2009 12:49:00 PM

"Ghosts" of the past can haunt us in the present. And it does take courage to continue living in a world filled with war and pain. But I can tell by this poem that your heart is "giving" more than you think. Being able to share your thoughts with others and inspire them is quite a gift that you give to readers. Love, Carolyn

Raul Moreno

Date: 9/17/2009 12:47:00 PM

Sad tone to this piece, hope things are going good for you, have a blessed day...Raul