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Ghosts-You Bet

friend’s bet… a threat d r e a r y e e r i e haunted daunted gate creaks fear speaks alone no phone old house - ghosts rouse? unlatch strike match dark throws shadows a dame in frame eyes dart! my heart… loud wail i bail! back off bets off rafter - laughter 3/17/2022

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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 3/20/2022 6:04:00 AM
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Gershon is so right , they should pay you for the sequel to Ghost busters .Outstanding write my friend, love it Kim. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/20/2022 11:14:00 AM
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LOL..thanks :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/19/2022 8:20:00 PM
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You have now penned the sequel to 'Ghostbusters.' Perhaps you'll title it 'Ghost-betters' ~ You bet your life, :) Groucho Marx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/19/2022 9:36:00 PM
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LOL! Love Groucho Marx! Fun!
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Debra L Brown
Date: 3/18/2022 5:16:00 PM
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You told a story in just a few words. Outstanding, you nailed this form, Kim ...Blessings ~ Debra
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/18/2022 8:26:00 PM
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Thank you, sweet friend!
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/18/2022 2:13:00 PM
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You've got the footle bug Kim, another great string. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/18/2022 4:32:00 PM
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Thank you, dear Tom :)
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/18/2022 1:55:00 PM
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Wow...this is good, Kim. I'm still trying to get the hang of this form. Thoroughly enjoyed it. How about "pants wet!"
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/18/2022 4:32:00 PM
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Thank you!
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 3/18/2022 12:52:00 PM
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nice job with the formatting - I particularly like the "d r e a r y // e e r i e" effect on slowing down the reading.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/18/2022 1:45:00 PM
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Thank you, Jeff, and for enjoying the slow down effects.

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