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Ghost Town

The little town sits by the road to nowhere Now a muted grey, the empty shells forgotten A sagging door, an empty window, a broken stair Sad reminders of those who used to lived there In the dust a single footprint left by some passerby Did he stop like me, to remember what used to be To listen to the desert wind giving a mournful sigh And bid the town, and her past, a last goodbye

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 3/1/2019 11:23:00 AM
Great description of a ghost town. I could feel the loneliness in this poem. Great job.
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Date: 3/1/2019 11:17:00 AM
How could a gem of a poem like this not win first prize? You carry the sense of its emptiness all through the poem! It's a good as Robert Frost's "Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Night". Excellent. Thanks for stopping by. I always appreciate bringing a smile or a chuckle to the reader. / M
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Date: 2/28/2019 7:21:00 PM
short and wonderful poem. Which contest was this in? Congrats for the top spot I see you got.
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Date: 2/27/2019 11:40:00 PM
Bravo, Barbara. Congrats on your well deserved top win.
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Date: 2/27/2019 10:03:00 PM
Very nice; love your story.
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 2/27/2019 10:24:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by.BG
Date: 2/27/2019 2:25:00 PM
Perfectly pictured, Barbara... Interestingly, I've read about bustling fishing villages that have disappeared due to droughts altering the shoreline radically, leaving behind forlorn, abandoned deserts. Nice write! :) gw
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Date: 2/26/2019 2:46:00 PM
I guess some of these old western towns still stand in disrepair, Barbara. Your lovely, nostalgic poem reminds us that populations used to flourish in these towns. Seeing them today is like taking a step back into history and trying to imagine the original inhabitants. Beautifully penned, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 2/26/2019 4:20:00 PM
Thank you , I visited one in Montana and it has stayed with me.. BG
Date: 2/26/2019 2:36:00 PM
Hello Barbara Gorelick, yes the history of the past is being rid of. I do not think it is right. have a nice day my friend.
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 2/26/2019 4:20:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by Darlene. BG

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