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No intention to be violent. Just a little humor! Hugs to all my fellow PSers! I love you all!

Ghost Town

The clanking sound of spurs, the sun’s glare
off the shiny doppelganger derringers.
Her hat tipped onto her sweating brow.

“Contests! We don’t need no stinking contests!”

Her cowhide boots kick up the prairie dust.
She’s not your quintessential grandmother.

Her torrential windpipe words ready for a fight.

“I will be number one! Like it or not!”

She spits tobacco into the air, daring a challenge,
and it drops at the feet of the biggest contest.

“Chew on that one...for a while!”

A patch over one green eye, the jealous one. She wears it
as a badge of honor. No one messes with Lady Cogburn.

Like showing off pictures of her family, she lets a scroll roll loose.
Her adjectives and verbs, nouns and sounds.

“I dare anyone to steal my verse! Who's brave enough 
to roll out one of their own!”

She spits and stares them down, as one courageous chick
steps forward and just as quick she lays her low.

“Contests! We don’t need no stinking contests! Now the rest of you scram!”

Dodge City, the ghost town, has one occupant. She lights her Virginia Slims, lets her poetic smoke circle the air — like vultures.

7/20/2018
Contests! We don’t need no stinking contests! Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: John Lawless
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 8/22/2018 9:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your 1st place win. Well done!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/22/2018 10:07:00 AM
Thank you, Susan!
Date: 8/20/2018 10:20:00 AM
Very clever indeed. Awesomely well written. Congrats!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/20/2018 10:29:00 AM
Thank you so much, Dale!
Date: 8/20/2018 10:14:00 AM
Bravo Kim many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan x
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/20/2018 10:28:00 AM
Thank you, Jan! Hugs, my friend!
Date: 8/20/2018 9:58:00 AM
Glad I didn't go up against this one Kim, I'd fear for my life, congratulations...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/20/2018 10:04:00 AM
LOL! Thanks,Charlie!
Date: 8/20/2018 7:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/20/2018 10:04:00 AM
Thank you, Alexis!
Date: 8/20/2018 6:07:00 AM
This is awesome Kim :)) Congratulations on a fabulous win! xomo!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/20/2018 10:01:00 AM
Thank you, Maureen!
Date: 8/20/2018 5:35:00 AM
Congrats on your win with this gem, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/20/2018 10:01:00 AM
Thank you, Charles!
Date: 8/20/2018 3:21:00 AM
Your poem was so creative and deserved to be at the top Kim! Applause! Congratulations! : )
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/20/2018 10:00:00 AM
Thank you, Connie! :)
Date: 8/20/2018 12:07:00 AM
Congrats, Kim, on your gold medal win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/20/2018 10:00:00 AM
Thank you,Line!
Date: 8/19/2018 9:36:00 PM
This is really great congrats on your win .
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/19/2018 10:05:00 PM
Thank you, Trish!
Date: 8/19/2018 2:22:00 PM
Fabulous ,Kim, congratulations on your awesome win...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/19/2018 2:33:00 PM
Thank you, Eve!
Date: 8/19/2018 11:58:00 AM
Very creative! Congratulations for your top win Kim :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/19/2018 2:21:00 PM
Thank you, dear friend!
Date: 8/19/2018 11:48:00 AM
An unusual and entertaining take on the theme, Kim and each one of us would have our own vivid image of her! Visions of granny from the 'Hillbillies' came to MY mind! Congratulations!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/19/2018 2:20:00 PM
Love your visual. One of my fave things is having readers add their take on my poem! Thank you!
Date: 8/19/2018 11:46:00 AM
Kim, this is PISSA!!! I taught all the young women in my family how to spit properly. This was great...tone, dialogue, confrontation.....Well done Lady Cogburn, now go light one up and write......
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/19/2018 2:19:00 PM
Thanks so much, John! So honored to win!
Date: 8/8/2018 11:32:00 AM
What great imagery Kim! You've painted a great scene. I don't reckon I would go up against her either seein's how I never learnt to spit! Good luck in the contest!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/8/2018 4:12:00 PM
Thank you, Dean :):)
Date: 7/24/2018 2:11:00 AM
G'day Kim … different in a poet sense, but by crikey it's a fun read, and I hope you do well with your entry. It deserves recognition - thanks Kim - Lindsay
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/24/2018 6:39:00 AM
Thank you, Lindsay!
Date: 7/23/2018 7:31:00 PM
Great depiction of her in this poem. Good luck.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/23/2018 10:40:00 PM
Thank you, M.L.!
Date: 7/21/2018 6:46:00 PM
Love the tough cow-WOMAN (didn't want to call her a cow-GIRL)) heroine! Much luck in the contest!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/22/2018 4:28:00 AM
Thank you so much, Michelle! cow-woman she is! :)
Date: 7/21/2018 2:55:00 AM
Kim, I love your original and creative cowboy take on this theme.. you're so gifted friend!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/21/2018 5:37:00 AM
Thank you so much, Lyric! :)
Date: 7/20/2018 8:59:00 AM
LOve your poetic ghost town, the weaving is superb, and the Cowgirl. Use to know one just like her.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/20/2018 9:47:00 AM
Thank you! Love that you used to know a tough cowgirl! :)
Date: 7/20/2018 8:16:00 AM
Nicely written, Kim, enjoyed this one. John
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/20/2018 9:46:00 AM
Thank you, John!
Date: 7/20/2018 8:12:00 AM
I love this! I want to BE Lady Cogburn. In many ways I think I am. A cowboy poem too! Wow! You have nailed it, Kim. I think this will be way up there in the winners circle. I am going to read it one more time, or maybe two. Have a fine day my friend!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/20/2018 8:15:00 AM
Thank you for your encouragement! <3 Kim
Date: 7/20/2018 8:11:00 AM
Lol..No wonder it's a ghost town, Nicely penned Kim..Good luck in the contest..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/20/2018 8:15:00 AM
Thanks so much, Joseph! You too!
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