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image of my dad's vintage eyeglasses

Poem entered into Mark Toney's Poetry Marathon contest, October 22, 2025. 

Premiere Contest WinnerGHOST LENSES

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They sit folded on the windowsill, a geometry of silver bones holding lenses thick as bottle-bottoms. Morning light catches dust particles dancing in their patient curve. He wore them low on his nose, peering over the frames while reading fishin’ magazines. The bridge bears twin grooves, softened leather pads worn thin by decades of Sunday morning news and crossword puzzles. Now they frame only stillness – ghost lenses reflecting the garden, empty orbits where his eyes once measured the world’s sharp edges. Cold metal remembers the warmth of his temples.
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Date: 11/1/2025 2:28:00 PM
Very nice! Congratulations!
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Date: 11/1/2025 6:53:00 AM
Sara, I do not know how I missed this intimate ode to how ordinary objects outlive their owners and become repositories of memory, but I have read it now and can't get it out of my head, this beautiful, spare, elegiac meditation on memory, wonderful stuff
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Date: 10/28/2025 2:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win with this creative write!
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Date: 10/27/2025 11:53:00 AM
Sara, congratulations on your trophy win with this wonderful, creative poem! So happy for you. Blessings and hugs!
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Date: 10/26/2025 12:06:00 AM
Dear Sara, are you still keeping your father's glasses who was fond of cross word puzzles and fishing magazines. With age, the lenses grew thick- as thick as bottle bottoms. Now they frame only stillness. Great poetry dear Sara. Congratulations on your well deserved trophy win.
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Date: 10/25/2025 3:19:00 PM
True poetry Sara. Congrats on your win. Hello to Billward
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Date: 10/25/2025 11:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your trophy win, Sara! This is a well written description with much feeling. Have a great weekend. :)
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Date: 10/25/2025 10:42:00 AM
Dear Sara, my soulful poet friend, this poem is breathtaking in its emotive and evocative imagery. So bittersweet, so poignant, especially in the poetic power of the last line. Deeply moving poetry! A potent yet tender portrait of a dad well loved and missed. Congratulations for your shining trophy win in Mark's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 10/25/2025 8:47:00 AM
Sara, I agree with Craig. This is exquisite. You begin with glasses on a windowsill, and in less than 20 lines the glasses become a living receptacle, “Cold metal remembers the warmth of his temples.” A Fav poem for me. Congratulations on your first place win on Mile 23 of my 2025 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 24 has already started. Only 3 more miles to go before the Qualifiers’ Final Placement contest!
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Date: 10/25/2025 8:21:00 AM
This...is writing at its best, a worthy first---got lost in its magic!
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Date: 10/22/2025 8:12:00 PM
With your description, we feel his face, his skin, his eyes, his ears, his hair ~ it's so much more that looking at a two-dimensional photo. A lovely tactile experience.
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Date: 10/23/2025 5:06:00 AM
wow, thank you for your observations and your in-depth comments--much appreciate them and you
Date: 10/22/2025 6:31:00 PM
wow this is a most in-depth poem from a woman who is very observant, loved your poem Sara, you must have loved him very much, I can feel it in every word you penned :_ l
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/23/2025 5:05:00 AM
wow, thank you, dear Rose. Yes, I loved him a great deal, still do. thanks for your visit today, hugs, Sara
Date: 10/22/2025 2:29:00 PM
This is quite moving, Sara. It haunts. It tugs. Beautiful. A fav
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/23/2025 5:05:00 AM
thanks, Paige, for your comments; they mean a lot as does the FAV. grateful
Date: 10/22/2025 11:37:00 AM
Sara, your poem is tinged with sadness and warm memories all at the same time taking me into a nostalgic place. On my desk I have a pair of my grandfather's glasses! They are a treasured memory of him just like your poem! Thank you for this beautiful poem. Hugs and blessings.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/23/2025 5:04:00 AM
awww, many thanks, Sam, for your delightful comments and for sharing your story about your grandfather's glasses = priceless. Sending you hugs & blessings as well
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