Ghalib-Faraz-Iqbal

Ghalib-Iqbal-Faraz!
Have you read the message from the east?
Iqbal is Called universal but here,
Insist to call him poet of east!
Do you know who said about purity?
By mere deed it can never be achieved!
If so, then these are even known by Satan.
He knows enough tricks to misdeed...

Do you know who said that he saw?
HIS presence in pagan’s heart, 
But the poor soul is unaware!

Moral soul of our culture is kept alive,
Truly by these writings, they revive!

These writing versions so emote,
Our cultural values since birth float,
In-between Iqbal, Faraz and Ghalib,
Their literature quite candid! 
And our culture is merely aided
By the projection of these commended!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 8/31/2014 2:55:00 AM
Very Nice and Well controlled in rhyme scheme and pattern, The flow and tone is good, usage of famous poets names turn this piece more lively and vital. I have studied as a subject ,I found both of these poets (Iqbal.Ghalib) tremendous ,I have no words to utter in respect of these personas.
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Hina Nasir
Date: 8/31/2014 10:59:00 AM
well said ... both were in their own ways prodigious ..thanks for the comment
Date: 8/16/2014 3:49:00 PM
A political picture you paint Hina... Well done to the reverse deceit or would I state contrite... Enjoyed... Verlena
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Hina Nasir
Date: 8/16/2014 3:55:00 PM
NIETHER reckless nor apologetic..but just mentioned the writing pieces of two ultra famous poets in my own words n stated that we dwindle in them ..as a nation i mean ..thanks alot for your opinion verlana ..:-)
Date: 8/14/2014 1:40:00 AM
I admire alamah Iqbal more than ghalib becoz ghalib was more a worldly shaer. Did u write dis yorself. Amazing poem with message for mortals. Nice to read u again.
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Hina Nasir
Date: 8/16/2014 3:47:00 PM
YOU R rite zaynub ...there is no comparison of Allama n ghalib ..Allama's is highend..n thanks a lot for appreciating ..ya i wrote it .this one also got a chanc to be published in a book eastern voices .. thanks a lot :-)
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