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Weary souls unwind underneath night’s natural inn Cigarettes and Whiskey race buds of young lovers’ tongues Winds play erotic melodies as stars faint, for the mood is set Whiskey stirred thoughts summit & sync Kisses and limbs tango as a saint’s ethic sink The moon complementing the unseen beauty Such as the gentle clashes of entangled eyelashes The winds hymns broke to hear love spoken Words that only are whispered from lips who share bonds unbroken Angels half heartily cover their eyes with clouds As stars and chirping crickets openly form crowds Time was as lost as their virginities Moons & stars faded asleep Whiskey bottles ran arid and dry While lipstick tipped the edge of unlit cigarettes The story begans

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/17/2009 8:59:00 AM
This is the best piec eof poetry I have read all week..from start to finish it speaks with so many images that really makes the poem very stron....too many great lines to just focus on one..really terrific piece.
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Date: 4/17/2009 8:49:00 AM
very nice..clashes of entangled eyelashes..enjoyed tht..March on well done.. hugs, robin maughan
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