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YOU’LL BE FEELING FIN-TASTIC IN NO TIME! Let us not have fears Or unnecessary tears For the chastising of one another Dear poets maybe best to not smother Let's get us back on track A handful out of 4,600 not bad a smack How I wish you would hear We're just two lost souls Swimming in a fish bowl Year after year!

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Robert Gorelick

Date: 5/6/2023 9:19:00 AM

Levelheaded and mature advice on an untenable situation, Anaya keep it up as you see fit, my amiga! Robert

I Am Anaya
Date: 5/6/2023 7:50:00 PM

Wow, Robert...flawed are there subdivisions? Somewhere out there are 4,000. Your amiga;D

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/6/2023 2:12:00 AM

Well rhymed and great ideas.

I Am Anaya
Date: 5/6/2023 7:29:00 AM

Glad you liked it, Victor! A warm place where we can come together and read each other's poetry and message's. :)

Bill Baker

Date: 5/5/2023 8:48:00 PM

Good advice in fine rhyme, Anaya. Write On my friend! Bill

I Am Anaya
Date: 5/6/2023 7:24:00 AM

Thank you, Bill! This is a warm and caring place with friends like you. Have a great weekend!

Arlo Parker

Date: 5/4/2023 8:59:00 PM

The track on Soup should be like the Yellow Brick Road: all glorious expectations on what lies ahead. We don't need the Wizard.

I Am Anaya
Date: 5/5/2023 8:10:00 AM

We can only hope for a better community and leadership, we are all alike and on the same path, even the Guru's, Arlo. Happy Cinco De Mayo! Amigo