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Get Betta Soon

YOU’LL BE FEELING FIN-TASTIC IN NO TIME!

Let us not have fears
Or unnecessary tears
For the chastising of one another
Dear poets maybe best to not smother
Let's get us back on track
A handful out of 4,600 not bad a smack
How I wish you would hear
We're just two lost souls
Swimming in a fish bowl
Year after year!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Gorelick Avatar
May 6, 2023 at 9:19 AM
Levelheaded and mature advice on an untenable situation, Anaya keep it up as you see fit, my amiga! Robert
Anaya Avatar
May 6, 2023 at 7:50 PM
Wow, Robert...flawed are there subdivisions? Somewhere out there are 4,000. Your amiga;D
Buhagiar Avatar
May 6, 2023 at 2:12 AM
Well rhymed and great ideas.
Anaya Avatar
May 6, 2023 at 7:29 AM
Glad you liked it, Victor! A warm place where we can come together and read each other's poetry and message's. :)
Baker Avatar
May 5, 2023 at 8:48 PM
Good advice in fine rhyme, Anaya. Write On my friend! Bill
Anaya Avatar
May 6, 2023 at 7:24 AM
Thank you, Bill! This is a warm and caring place with friends like you. Have a great weekend!
Parker Avatar
May 4, 2023 at 8:59 PM
The track on Soup should be like the Yellow Brick Road: all glorious expectations on what lies ahead. We don't need the Wizard.
Anaya Avatar
May 5, 2023 at 8:10 AM
We can only hope for a better community and leadership, we are all alike and on the same path, even the Guru's, Arlo. Happy Cinco De Mayo! Amigo
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