Premiere Contest WinnerGet a Room?

They told me to "Go get a room!"
But how could they even presume
My income suffices;
These real estate prices?
Dear parents, your house is my tomb!

8/6/2026
Written for Margarita Lillico's Get a Room Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Kendrick Avatar
September 3, 2026 at 4:50 AM
Delighted you got the high prize in the contest. Way to go. I enjoyed reading this one today and thank you for sharing it with us. 👏✍️. Sara K.
Godwin Avatar
August 18, 2026 at 7:14 AM
OH, I LOVE this. So relevant to this century but let's soar past that and just laugh, love laugh medicine
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 17, 2026 at 3:57 AM
Well deserved win in this contest.👏
Borg Avatar
August 16, 2026 at 3:00 PM
Congratulations on your Trophy Win, Jessie. Well deserved. Sad for youngsters nowadays unable to cut the parental apron strings and become independent.
Lillico  Avatar
August 15, 2026 at 11:43 AM
Hello Jesse, congratulations on the podium win! Your spin on the room with an excellent punch line got my LOL funny bone. The tomb sealed the deal 😊 M.
Rowe Avatar
August 15, 2026 at 5:44 PM
Thank you for the contest and the placement. I'm glad it was so well received. I feel like if I have a writing MO it's trying to take contest prompts for a little unexpected turn. 😀
Dietrich Avatar
August 15, 2026 at 1:10 AM
Excellent limerick. Wow. Congrats 👏
Rowe Avatar
August 15, 2026 at 5:40 PM
Thank you.
Crandall Avatar
August 14, 2026 at 6:38 PM
Haha, good one - I bet a lot of younger folks can relate to this one!
Rowe Avatar
August 15, 2026 at 5:39 PM
A lot of older people too, but the story wouldn't have been as humorous from that point of view. 😂
Poet Avatar
August 14, 2026 at 3:55 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved trophy win with this outstanding limerick
Rowe Avatar
August 14, 2026 at 4:10 AM
Thanks for the read and comment.
Strudwick Avatar
August 14, 2026 at 1:49 AM
Plenty will relate to that one
Rowe Avatar
August 14, 2026 at 4:10 AM
Yup. Sadly. Thanks for the ocmment.
Jones Avatar
August 6, 2026 at 6:40 PM
lol! Good one!
Rowe Avatar
August 14, 2026 at 4:11 AM
Thank you.
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