Notes About The Poem

May 8, 2021

~ Poem Of The Day ~
May 10, 2021

~ Fourth Place ~
Premiere Contest: Nature
Sponsor: Regina Mcintosh
 


 

Germination

Ah, the fortitude of a circle
the circular wisdom 
of  spring to summer  fall to winter  
the spinning wheel’s twist of threads -
at once both self-reliant and reliant

my soul to embryo  seed to seedling

the mettle it takes for the genesis;  
for my poppy pod to wake and break
a tiny speck of matter  a fleck of duality unleashed
I surrender my dormancy to the earth -
roots reach deep like pale squiggly fingers
..for my kernel was laid to rest to bustle to life..
while my headstrong head pushes up through the soil 
I come to be.. like a new idea taking shape 
a physical being grounded
while seeking the realm of the Sun
the source of spirit as essential 
as the dark womb from which I emerge
with a heart budding with the universe from nothing 

I sprout as a sprig from a rounded grain
conceived in a gold-dusted flurry of furry buzz..
a bumblebee's dalliance with the center of a whorl
a mote of pollen so mite-like  -- but 
        m i g h t y 
in   purpose   potential   and   power  
woven together in the art of creation

wind-driven autumn rains and sips of melted snow 
..mother’s milk during the passage of time..
sweetly feeds the gentle needs for my tender birth
daystar’s dabble-dance with shadows 
charm the chill from the cradle of the garden floor -
warm ginger dapples flit to find me between
canopy gaps in swish and sway..
mini-spots mirroring the disk of the Sun reminds me;
the image of what I’ll become
when my solar heart shines in a petal-chalice of flame..
rapture stirs the layers of humus
penetrating my essence with a ripening
stoking my fortitude to fulfill my destiny  
to break free of that which holds me down 
and reach ever higher inspired by a promise;
the golden circle of solace.. the bull's-eye in the sky 
whose glow does kiss and grow my soul -
my inner space of bright sure to blaze 
in a blossom cup’s confinement 

my soul to embryo  seed to seedling

sown to assure my flowering  
my earthy ascension fulfills Nature’s cycle of nativity;
above the loam  I rise  to unfurl
and lift my airy leaves’ uncurl up high 
in praise of the light 
as the end of a gray season curves 
into the festive yellow equinox of resurgence
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Gauthier Avatar
May 31, 2021 at 8:40 AM
Bravo, Susan ~ awesome poem. Congrats on your well deserved POTD!
Ashley Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 6:34 PM
Dear Line, your beautiful comments are held in my deepest gratitude. Thank you, my sweet friend, for your kindness and for your congrats. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Lusardi Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 12:20 PM
Probably one of the most enlightening works i have read in a while. Excellent visual.
Ashley Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 6:32 PM
Your gracious visit and lovely comments are truly uplifting, John. I'm so glad you enjoyed my poem. Thank you for sharing your inspiring thoughts with me. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Proxenos Avatar
May 29, 2021 at 9:43 AM
Susan all I can do is apologise, I did not see this gem of a poem and the fact that you received POTD for it. Wow it is so awesome and you were placed for it. I love this write, you describe the change of season so poetically perfect in the last two lines. We were burgled whilst we sleep on holiday, but I mean they cleaned us out whilst sleeping. For the last two weeks Hubby and I have been running around for quotes to give the Insurance company. I have posted a poem. Hugs, blessings Jen
Ashley Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 6:28 PM
My dear poetry sis, there is never a need for you to apologize, I certainly understand how life's circumstances can keep one away from PS, being as this is why I am absent all too often these days myself. Thank you for your beautiful comments and kind congrats, I cherish your thoughtful gems, Jennifer. I'm so sorry to hear of your burglary - how terrible. Thank God you and yours weren't hurt. I hope you received my soup mail. Warmest wishes and hugs to you.. ~Susan
Kaufman Avatar
May 27, 2021 at 11:54 AM
WOW SUSAN..I loved it, especially "rise to unfurl" and "in a petal chalice of flame" absolutely great one. congrats on win.
Ashley Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 7:00 PM
Dear Nancy, your gracious visit and precious comments are wonderful to receive. Thank you, my friend, for sharing your beautiful thoughts and kind congrats with me. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Kulkarni Avatar
May 25, 2021 at 9:20 AM
Simply beautiful poem!!
Ashley Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 5:19 PM
Dear Smita, thank you for sharing in the journey of this poem with me and for your uplifting comment. I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Lawrence Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 2:11 PM
Susan, So alive ..so tender..so spiritual. Precious and beckoning ...beauteous imagery of birth and struggle and evolution towards the sun. I loved this journey - my soul to embryo seed to seedling... a fav for me. Thank you for your magic. Blessings to you, Susan :)
Ashley Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 5:32 PM
Dear Susan, I relish the tender beauty of your comments and the honor of your fav. I hold them in my deepest appreciation. Thank you for sharing your precious thoughts with me and for sharing in the journey of this poem. I so admire the artistic magic of your poetic pen too, my sweet friend. Please accept my apologies for my late reply. Warmest wishes and hugs always.. ~Susan
Callus Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 11:19 AM
This contest dedicated to Nature has definitely inspired you, Susan! I have never come across the cycle of life described in such striking and delightful poetic language....whichever way one would like to regard it (maybe as a metaphor, personification...). For sure, one reading is not enough. ~ Warm regards and hugs, my friend. // paul
Ashley Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 5:16 PM
Dear Paul, your comments are like an enchantment.. they never fail to inspire my soul and warm my heart. Thank you for your uplifting appreciation of my poetic endeavors. I hold your precious friendship and poetic artistry in my truest appreciation as well, my wonderful friend. Please accept my apologies for my late reply. Warmest wishes and hugs always.. ~Susan
Faulkner Avatar
May 14, 2021 at 9:00 PM
This is so reverantly inspiring of the cyclical wisdom of Nature, it makes my soul dance on the breeze of a new springtime promise, so thrilled to see this work of art as a POTD, so deserving, my friend :)
Ashley Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 2:23 PM
My dearest Michelle, I am enthralled to receive such inspiring comments from a poetess I so highly admire, whose artistic vision and gifted pen I so adore. Thank you, my sweet friend, for sharing the beauty of your thoughts, for sharing in the journey of this poem and for extending your heartwarming congrats. Please accept my apologies for my late reply. Warmest wishes and hugs.. ~Susan
Rose  Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 8:33 AM
You have unleashed the earthiness in your and have penned a spectacular view of your nature. Thank you dear Susan for always giving me food for the heart. :)
Ashley Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 2:16 PM
My dearest Rose, the beauty of your comments touch my heart very deeply as does your inspiring friendship. Thank you for sharing in the journey of this poem with me. Your uplifting sentiments are held in my truest appreciation, sweet poetess. Please accept my apologies for my late reply. Warmest wishes and hugs.. ~Susan
Mitra Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 9:39 PM
What a unique side of nature you have portrayed...deep philosophy embedded in your beautiful words...this poem needs to be taken in word by word...phrase by phrase...miracle of life dear Susan you have unfolded with your talent
Ashley Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 2:12 PM
Dear Debjani, the depth and breadth of beauty instilled in your comments has been taken in word by word and enshrined in my grateful heart. Thank you, dear poetess, for illuminating my poem's page with your shining and deeply admired presence. Please accept my apologies for my late reply. Warmest wishes and hugs.. ~Susan
Buehler Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 9:15 PM
The miraculous process of the sprouting of a seed is here revealed with eloquence and the most marvelous imagery. Congratulations on POTD, Susan. Kindest regards, Evelyn
Ashley Avatar
May 28, 2021 at 7:42 AM
My dear friend, Evelyn, it is such a joy to receive your insightful comments and heartwarming congrats. Thank you for sharing your beautiful thoughts with me, sweet poetess. I am as inspired by your lovely heart as I am by your gleaming pen. Please accept my apologies for my late reply. Warmest wishes and hugs.. ~Susan
Poet Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 8:40 PM
A lovely poem! The tiny flower will be delighted that someone had finally noticed its wondrous stages! A new great job. Congratulations on winning POTD! Have a wonderful evening, hugs and reagrds
Ashley Avatar
May 28, 2021 at 7:37 AM
Dear Lasaad, it is always such a pleasure when your wonderful presence graces my poem's page. I adore your comments and I agree that even the tiniest flower is in a state of delight when its accomplishments are recognized. I cherish the insightful beauty of your shining comments. Thank you, my friend, for your uplifting visit and kind congrats. Please accept my apologies for the delay in my response. Warmest wishes and hugs.. ~Susan
Ray Choudhury Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 3:58 PM
Dear Susan, Congratulations on your awesome win, and POTD too. I am inspired and awed, as usual, with the exquisite mastery of the lines with your golden pen. You take the breath away with your brilliant metaphors and vibrant images. Love and hugs ~ Mala
Ashley Avatar
May 28, 2021 at 7:28 AM
Dearest Mala, the heartfelt beauty of your comments and kind congrats inspire me and take my breath away. I am filled with gratitude to receive your thoughtful and uplifting words that spur me on in the right direction. I am humbled to receive your praise, sweet poetess, since I hold your gifted pen in such high regard and I am honored to be embraced within your circle of poetry friends. I embrace you too, my wonderfully creative and inspiring friend. Please accept my apologies for the delay in my response to you. Warmest wishes and love.. ~Susan
Kauffman Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 11:32 AM
My dearest Rhyme time friend, the seed of inspiration truly germinated in your amazing lines - "my soul to embryo seed to seedling!" You have brilliantly captured the simple journey of a seed from imagined life to maturity into a poem of depth in life's metaphor. I am awed and inspired, as usual, by your amazing lines. Blessings of life to you dear Susan. Congratulations on your win and on your POTD honors. Sam~
Ashley Avatar
May 28, 2021 at 7:18 AM
My inspiring rhyme time friend, I am humbled to receive your beautiful thoughts. I am filled with gratitude as your creative artistry and wondrous poetry always leave me in a state of awe. Your heartwarming congrats are an honor to receive as well, sweet poetess. Your comments are a treasure that I hold near and dear to my heart. Thank you, my dearest and most talented poetry sis for sharing your uplifting spirit with me. Please accept my apologies for the delay in my response.. Warmest wishes and hugs sent to you, dearest Sam.. ~Susan
Mcintosh Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 3:47 AM
Congrats on POTD too, Susan. Much love and blessings, Gina
Ashley Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 11:49 AM
Oh, it is so wonderful for you to return with such kind congrats, Gina, my inspiring friend. Thank you for the delight of your gracious visit. Warmest wishes and love to you, lovely lady.. ~Susan
Carber Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 8:11 AM
Nicely done, Susan-congrats on your win!
Ashley Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 11:45 AM
Thank you so much for your precious visit and comment, dear L. J. Your kind congrats are held in my truest gratitude. Warmest wishes, my wonderful friend.. ~Susan
Alex Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 5:04 AM
Congratulations!
Ashley Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 11:30 AM
Thank you, Christuraj. I will visit your splendid poetry soon. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Mcintosh Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 4:25 AM
Wow. This is awesome! I love it - another wonder from your book of wonders, imaginings so grand they take the breath to read them. Love it! Congrats and God bless you always, Love, Gina
Ashley Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 11:40 AM
My dear friend, Gina, thank you for the honor of my placement in your inspiring contest. I am humbled by your lovely appreciation for my poem. It is a thrill to be among the talented poets/poetesses on your list. Your sponsorship is prized. Warmest wishes, sweet lady.. ~Susan
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 9:36 PM
Wow Susan! Your words astound my senses in this amazingly created vision of nature’s birth. This is simply exquisite! Congratulations on a much deserved POTD! Your poetry leaves me breathless and so inspired. Blessings xxoo
Ashley Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 11:29 AM
Thank you for your gracious visit and beautiful comments, dearest Connie. I am humbled and honored by your appreciation of my poem. Both your heartwarming congrats and your generous kindness are held in my truest gratitude, my sweet friend. Warmest wishes and hugs.. ~Susan
Kitchin Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 6:34 PM
Congratulations on POTD, Susan!
Ashley Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 6:42 PM
Dear Tania, thank you so much for your visit and heartwarming congratulations. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan
Edmonds  Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 6:33 PM
A wonderful free verse Susan, so well you express the miracles of life and nature. Congratulations on poem of the day… Belle
Ashley Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 6:40 PM
It's so wonderful of you to visit and comment, dear Belle. Your heartwarming congrats are held in my deepest gratitude, my sweet friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Roper Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 5:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD, Susan. Hugs Eve
Ashley Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 6:24 PM
Thank you, dear Eve. Your wonderful visit and kind congrats are deeply appreciated. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Sands Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 3:15 PM
Congratulations for this great POTD Susan :)
Ashley Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 6:23 PM
Dear Heidi, thank you for your gracious visit and kind congrats. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Nicole Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 2:49 PM
"I come to be.. like a new idea taking shape" A very unique way to express *Life* This is delicate and tender, all at the same time. *You* are a beautiful flower, my dear sweet friend. May your words always bloom. Congratulations Susan, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Ashley Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 6:57 PM
Dearest Brandy, my lovely friend, your shining light graces my poem so beautifully. I cherish your precious response to my poem and hold your appreciation and kind congrats in the depths of my gratitude. We are both wildflowers flourishing in endless poetic meadows of our hearts' imagination. Long may we grow and may your magical words always bloom, too, sweet poetess. Warmest wishes and hugs.. ~Susan
La France Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 1:09 PM
Susan, beautiful and congratulations on receiving POEM OF THE DAY enjoy the honor, love _Constance
Ashley Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 6:31 PM
Thank you for your gracious visit, Constance. Your lovely comments and kind congrats are a joy to receive. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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