Kim Rodrigues Poet Free verse

Georgia in mid-March

the roaring sound rejuvenates      my heart

wind whips,
                    bells tinkle,
                                       flag flaps
                                                       thought i
needed to change
                                into shorts
but my

               just bare feet,
    thin sweater      blue jeans
                                                         perfect
for this early Spring                            blustering

lilliputian tweets and vroom beats

      such temperate tempest jubilation

lifts                                                          my spirits
if

the sea  were involved
with
its  swanky salt                       I’m seconds away
from
                           the pearly gates

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Abdullah Alhemaidy March 25, 2024 at 5:47 PM Georgia is a famous state. I have never been there, yet I read about it. Nice read! Very enjoyed poem!

Paige Hind March 25, 2024 at 4:11 PM I could feel the air. Almost. Hope you go to the beach soon! ;) Hugs

Andrea Dietrich March 24, 2024 at 8:02 PM Fantastic and enthusiastic poem for March!

Gershon Wolf March 24, 2024 at 8:01 PM I can just picture the windblown, windswept landscape, Kim. Bravo, Gershon

Bill Baker March 24, 2024 at 3:28 PM Someone is having a great day. Sounds like you, Kim. Uplifting and enjoyable poem to read. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us, my friend. Bill

Silent One March 24, 2024 at 8:15 AM Very creative Kim.. Kim Rodrigues March 24, 2024 at 10:29 AM Thank you, Silent!

Tonye George March 24, 2024 at 8:00 AM I'd love to see those gates too. Lovely piece Kim. Kim Rodrigues March 24, 2024 at 10:29 AM Thank you, Tonye! What a view!

Panagiota Romios March 23, 2024 at 9:09 PM Georgia and toy seem well suitrd ti each other. Your descriptio n of it are stunninf and narcg the frateful poetess I know you To be! Phave to fave this! Pangie Kim Rodrigues March 24, 2024 at 6:19 AM Thank you, Pangie! So glad you liked it!