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George Got His Gun

Spilled gasoline smell and your view Terrified - I can see from the metal cage. How do water drops are kissing and flowing down hanging around your blonde curls. * The thought, restlessness sorrow, love, desperation ... All that drills my skull and enters the brain. Road, dream, tiredness, and fervor of yearning ... I became a piece in the dragon's womb. * Crawling in the muddy universe I'm rolling through the memories, Hypnotized by your heels as they leave the circle where I lie. * The tired rain is washing my consciousness on the shore of a sleepy lake. While through the bubbles of hope love gets out the lake huge and slimy and eats me hungrily and quickly with the creaking tooth. -----#-----

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Date: 9/20/2022 8:44:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... making me dread violence while grateful to God for granting peace by His love. According to John 3:16, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." God bless you.
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Maximilian G. Wolf
Date: 9/22/2022 2:39:00 AM
Thank you. God bless you too.
Date: 1/12/2022 3:19:00 AM
Very descriptive and expressive lines penned in this one. The terror and nightmares after the battle is over must be horrible for the soldier in active duty. Sara
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Maximilian G. Wolf
Date: 1/12/2022 3:39:00 AM
Sara, Thank you. Every war should be avoided, no matter what. ~Max

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