Geometry of Creation

Geometry of Creation
And it fell like a drop out of nowhere,
And it left me high without a glimpse,
And it again started to grow so green and wild,
And then it started to grow so brown and dark.
It was God and me and nothing else,
It was Jack and Jill and no one else,
Out of nowhere we came by and,
Nowhere are we heading to,
And this is how it all began,
When we were young and child,
And when we were all shaped up.
Oh, lo lo, this is the way it was and we were,
All made out of a patch of nothingness,
For another patch of meaninglessness,
May it sound so logical,
May it call some rings to your ears,
Whatever may it hear, smell, or touch,
Here we are again and again as,
One generation passeth and,
The other generation cometh but,
The sun still riseth.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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March 29, 2010 at 6:53 PM
This is a lovely poem, and thank you for entering my contest, In Search of the Human Mind, however, did you not read the instructions for the contest, you were to contact me, for a topic to write about, not make your own, I am going to respectfully ask you to remove this poem from the contest.. if you care to be part of the contest contact me by soupmail.. or by commenting on one of my poems and I will give you a topic ... constance
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March 29, 2010 at 11:49 AM
The last two lines drew me especially...The Son still riseth..Welcome to soup...Sara
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March 28, 2010 at 2:31 PM
I sense much life and wisdom in this delightful poetry Reza >> James
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March 28, 2010 at 10:32 AM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight..luv.. "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup ..Linda-Marie..
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March 27, 2010 at 5:20 PM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Reza. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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