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Genus Corvus

Passerine in black
Jousting for mid air order
Murder in the skies




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Mitch White

April 19, 2010 at 6:05 AM

Great Haiku- you deserve the win Congrats James

Jimmy Anderson

April 14, 2010 at 9:52 AM

Hey James, Congratulations on your Ist Place win in the contest! ..Enjoy your win...Jimmy

Kim M

April 11, 2010 at 11:34 AM

I keep returning to read this haiku, James. A perfect depiction of the combat/struggle between birds, as inspired from the photograph displayed for the contest. Congratulations on your win in the contest. I appreciate your talent.

Margaret Foster

April 9, 2010 at 9:43 PM

I love the murder reference James, very well used. congratulations...Margaret

Steven Mossburg

April 9, 2010 at 6:43 PM

very clever. congratulations on your win

Faleshia Murphy

April 9, 2010 at 3:57 PM

very nice you really captured that picture well done congrats on your win faleshia

Andrea Dietrich

April 9, 2010 at 2:47 PM

James, I just now went to my dictionary to understand your first word. Cool choice. I had never heard of it before. I was afraid to use a particular word becuase I did not know what kind of birds they were. haha. LUv, andrea

Andrea Dietrich

April 9, 2010 at 2:42 PM

Excellent, my friend, and ZOWIE YOWIE, I just saw you made two number one placements one after the other. WAY to go. I bet you are thrilled. LUv, Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

April 9, 2010 at 2:30 PM

Two first place wins in one day, James! Hooray for the Highlander. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 9, 2010 at 2:29 PM

Congrats James on your 1st place win in Raul's contest... excellent write and win for u..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Laura Mckenzie

April 9, 2010 at 1:03 PM

James~Congratulations on your first place win! Laura :)

Nick Bagnall

April 9, 2010 at 12:54 PM

I can just imagine them fighting for supremacy, excelent - congrats on FIRST place !

Constance La France

April 9, 2010 at 11:24 AM

Congrats on first place, you are very good at these short poems.. love constance

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

April 9, 2010 at 11:15 AM

congrats on you 1st place win with this intriguing haiku, James :) way to go! each line is so unique indeed :)

Raul Moreno

April 9, 2010 at 10:56 AM

James, congratulations in winning my contest...Raul

Mary Meade Stephenson

April 9, 2010 at 10:00 AM

Deeply intriguing James can hold more than what meets the eye!! As always your writing is such a delight! Thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read my pieces! Have a great day~Mary~

Dr.Ram Mehta

April 8, 2010 at 9:33 PM

Very wonderful haiku

Carrie Richards

April 8, 2010 at 5:33 PM

I'm loving how everyone sees this with interesting differences!! Well done, James!! Good luck!!

Doris Culverhouse

April 8, 2010 at 4:42 PM

interesting poem, is it for the contest?

Audrey Haick

April 8, 2010 at 3:49 PM

ooh! James..great imagination, Highlander!!I wish you good luck in the contest...but you really don't need it...a sure winner, this is...Peace, Audrey