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Genus Corvus

Passerine in black Jousting for mid air order Murder in the skies http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/poetry-soup-8.php

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Mitch White

Date: 4/19/2010 6:05:00 AM

Great Haiku- you deserve the win Congrats James

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 4/14/2010 9:52:00 AM

Hey James, Congratulations on your Ist Place win in the contest! ..Enjoy your win...Jimmy

Kim M

Date: 4/11/2010 11:34:00 AM

I keep returning to read this haiku, James. A perfect depiction of the combat/struggle between birds, as inspired from the photograph displayed for the contest. Congratulations on your win in the contest. I appreciate your talent.

Margaret Foster

Date: 4/9/2010 9:43:00 PM

I love the murder reference James, very well used. congratulations...Margaret

Steven Mossburg

Date: 4/9/2010 6:43:00 PM

very clever. congratulations on your win

Faleshia Murphy

Date: 4/9/2010 3:57:00 PM

very nice you really captured that picture well done congrats on your win faleshia

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/9/2010 2:47:00 PM

James, I just now went to my dictionary to understand your first word. Cool choice. I had never heard of it before. I was afraid to use a particular word becuase I did not know what kind of birds they were. haha. LUv, andrea

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/9/2010 2:42:00 PM

Excellent, my friend, and ZOWIE YOWIE, I just saw you made two number one placements one after the other. WAY to go. I bet you are thrilled. LUv, Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/9/2010 2:30:00 PM

Two first place wins in one day, James! Hooray for the Highlander. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/9/2010 2:29:00 PM

Congrats James on your 1st place win in Raul's contest... excellent write and win for u..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 4/9/2010 1:03:00 PM

James~Congratulations on your first place win! Laura :)

Nick Bagnall

Date: 4/9/2010 12:54:00 PM

I can just imagine them fighting for supremacy, excelent - congrats on FIRST place !

Constance La France

Date: 4/9/2010 11:24:00 AM

Congrats on first place, you are very good at these short poems.. love constance

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/9/2010 11:15:00 AM

congrats on you 1st place win with this intriguing haiku, James :) way to go! each line is so unique indeed :)

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/9/2010 10:56:00 AM

James, congratulations in winning my contest...Raul

Mary Meade Stephenson

Date: 4/9/2010 10:00:00 AM

Deeply intriguing James can hold more than what meets the eye!! As always your writing is such a delight! Thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read my pieces! Have a great day~Mary~

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/8/2010 9:33:00 PM

Very wonderful haiku

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/8/2010 5:33:00 PM

I'm loving how everyone sees this with interesting differences!! Well done, James!! Good luck!!

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/8/2010 4:42:00 PM

interesting poem, is it for the contest?

Audrey Haick

Date: 4/8/2010 3:49:00 PM

ooh! James..great imagination, Highlander!!I wish you good luck in the contest...but you really don't need it...a sure winner, this is...Peace, Audrey

Joyce Johnson

Date: 4/8/2010 3:24:00 PM

A winner for sure with double meaning. Great work. Joyce

Rick Parise

Date: 4/8/2010 2:14:00 PM

Descriptive, qiute nice~~~~got me thunkin Thank you, rick~~~~~Salem,Oregon