Genuine Damsel

I was lurking around but she finally found me,
We're watching the clouds and lying under a tree.

Saying words to be outspoken,
Worrying nothing even the glass is broken.

And I will lastingly love her because she's with me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Agustin Avatar
December 15, 2024 at 8:56 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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March 21, 2016 at 9:08 PM
I like this poem, Jonna. LINDA
Gallano Avatar
April 12, 2016 at 5:11 AM
Awe. Thank you!
Breidenthal Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 2:47 PM
Awesome poem! Lovely !! A well - deserved 7. This describes how cool you are. Thanks for commenting on my poems. Check out: Dare to Wonder by me. You might like it. :)
Gallano Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 3:08 PM
Having the same feeling here! Thank you and I would love to it! :)
Boddie Avatar
January 18, 2016 at 6:19 PM
it pleases me to confess....I offer damsels no distress....because of God's Creations, Woman Is The Best....that's my truth, and I never guess....so if you want to end the stress....find your lady and keep her undressed....that's that freaky goodness from goodest....lol....great write jonna....much enjoyed....;)
Gallano Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 6:21 AM
Haha! Kinda absurd! But anyways, thank you! :)
Gulley Avatar
January 17, 2016 at 1:34 PM
Beautiful Limerick, A (7) for me and a favorite. Beautifully written......Sharon : )
Gallano Avatar
January 17, 2016 at 3:25 PM
Ohh! My gosh! Thank you so much! I'm so flattered!
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