Gently Brushing Nightbreak

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gently brushing nightbreak moon sheds our outlines ‘round treetops and here, warm breeze emboldens us curves bare as peeled leafage I yearn for hands fondling moist skin. .............. Dear Heart’s Writing Challenge 2, May 2019, Lind68868 Theme Chosen: A Dream ( Revised) 5/16/2019

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/24/2019 7:37:00 PM

wow, this is one of my very favorites on the list! FAntastic and sensual, Nette. Congrats.

Robert Lindley

Date: 5/24/2019 2:48:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Dear Heart's Lind68868 contest my friend! God bless.... Robert

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/21/2019 11:56:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poem, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France

Date: 5/21/2019 9:37:00 AM

Nette, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful write!

Paul Callus

Date: 5/20/2019 3:01:00 PM

Absolutely beautiful, romantic, sensual and seductive. ~ Congratulations on your podium finish, Nette! Hugs// paul

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/20/2019 2:38:00 PM

A very tantalising poem my friend which tickles the imagination and seduces with poetic beauty! Good luck Nette, holding thumbs. Hugs, Jennifer.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 5/18/2019 4:25:00 PM

A great one Nette, glad you revised it for the contest!

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 5/17/2019 5:30:00 PM

Oh sweets, so sorry to hear your suffering with back pain too. I think its the worse. I find heat seems to help, Love you girl, stay strong, and healthy as can be, xo

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/17/2019 8:25:00 AM

- A beauty, Nette - GL in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)