Nette Onclaud Poet Verse

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Gently Brushing Nightbreak

gently brushing nightbreak
moon sheds our outlines ‘round treetops
and here, warm breeze emboldens us


curves bare as peeled leafage

I yearn for hands fondling moist skin.


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Dear Heart’s Writing Challenge 2, May 2019, Lind68868 
Theme Chosen: A Dream ( Revised)
5/16/2019

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Andrea Dietrich May 24, 2019 at 7:37 PM wow, this is one of my very favorites on the list! FAntastic and sensual, Nette. Congrats.

Robert Lindley May 24, 2019 at 2:48 PM Congratulations on your win in Dear Heart's Lind68868 contest my friend! God bless.... Robert

Anne-Lise Andresen May 21, 2019 at 11:56 AM - Congratulations on your winning poem, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France May 21, 2019 at 9:37 AM Nette, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful write!

Paul Callus May 20, 2019 at 3:01 PM Absolutely beautiful, romantic, sensual and seductive. ~ Congratulations on your podium finish, Nette! Hugs// paul

Jennifer Proxenos May 20, 2019 at 2:38 PM A very tantalising poem my friend which tickles the imagination and seduces with poetic beauty! Good luck Nette, holding thumbs. Hugs, Jennifer.

Tania Kitchin May 18, 2019 at 4:25 PM A great one Nette, glad you revised it for the contest!

Mystic Rose Rose May 17, 2019 at 5:30 PM Oh sweets, so sorry to hear your suffering with back pain too. I think its the worse. I find heat seems to help, Love you girl, stay strong, and healthy as can be, xo

Anne-Lise Andresen May 17, 2019 at 8:25 AM - A beauty, Nette - GL in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lawrence Sharp May 16, 2019 at 11:23 PM Very seductive, very enticing; great work.

William Kelii Kekaula May 16, 2019 at 8:58 PM Mental pictures matures in a daze nette, Aloha wk

Heidi Sands May 16, 2019 at 4:13 PM Very nice Nette. You are talented :)

Vijay Pandit May 16, 2019 at 3:48 PM Happy dreams, friend..so romantic!

John Gondolf May 16, 2019 at 3:37 PM Oh, Nette, this is so romantic and sensual, I love it. All my best. John

Tom Cunningham May 16, 2019 at 2:34 PM Very romantic lines nette, Good luck. Tom.