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Gentle Winds

Gentle Winds

It seemed that she was lost for words in a forest  of  memories
thoughts dangled from branches letters blew in the  wind some
punctuation mingled with emotion  seedlings of love  hope and
understanding over-standing inner and  outer winds  of change
no need for epic compilations just  one  final  first whisper said
                                                             … ‘Stanza’ the clown

12 July 2016


One Stanza – One Only – Poetry Contest
                     Sponsored by Broken Wings

Copyright © Kai Michael Neumann | Year Posted 2016

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Anthony Mark Date: 8/13/2016 4:41:00 AM Now ths I is wordy, ..but very worthy, clever and engaging, rolls easy and the personalisation becomes believable...well done...this is a much better comfort zone to reading narratives from pamphlets....Ian Login to Reply Kai Michael Neumann Date: 8/13/2016 7:59:00 AM Thank you Ian. I take your point...

Kim Merryman Date: 7/23/2016 9:12:00 PM I like the unique combination of wind, words and trees that you linked together. Congrats on your placement! Blessings! Login to Reply Kai Michael Neumann Date: 7/24/2016 12:59:00 PM Thank you very much. Support needed and appreciated, Kai

Jesse Day Date: 7/19/2016 10:57:00 PM Nicely composed verse. Congratulations for your impressive 5th place win in the One Staza One-Only contest! Jesse Login to Reply Kai Michael Neumann Date: 7/24/2016 12:59:00 PM Thank you very much. Take care, Kai Kai Michael Neumann Date: 7/24/2016 12:48:00 PM Thank you for that. It is hard for me to keep it short, but very good practice. Best greetings.