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Written on November 15, 2023

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Gentle Night

Violet skies regard the drowsy moon, Stars glisten on the edges of dark night, Laughing eagerly wherever they’re strewn, Evoking stories that gentle hearts write. Stars glisten on the edges of dark night, Softly glowing, restoring rest to souls, Evoking stories that gentle hearts write, With soothing words, their poetry consoles. Softly glowing, restoring rest to souls, Breathless promises shake the naked dew, With soothing words, their poetry consoles. Saintly blessings stirred the spirit’s breakthrough. Breathless promises shake the naked dew, Forest’s melody invites leaves to dance, Saintly blessings stirred the spirit’s breakthrough, Whispering passion, like a heart’s romance. Forest’s melody invites leaves to dance, Bursting with light, the trees sway to the tune, Whispering passion, like a heart’s romance, Waltzing with the rabbits, deer and raccoon. Bursting with light, the trees sway to the tune, The presence of starlight swells the heart’s muse. Waltzing with the rabbits, deer and raccoon. Perfect peace, wonders and dreams will enthuse. The presence of starlight swells the heart’s muse. Laughing eagerly wherever they’re strewn, Perfect peace, wonders and dreams will enthuse. Violet skies regard the drowsy moon!
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Date: 11/15/2023 9:09:00 PM
Nice Pantoum poetry, Gina. Wonderful imagery and well written, my friend. Nice choice of image for an introduction to your poem. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Date: 11/15/2023 3:33:00 PM
You do this form so well.. not only does it flow and rhyme so well.. each line has such vivid imagery.. such an excellent connotation of poetic words.. you have weaved them so well and created one of the best pantoums I have read.. a fave for me..
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