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Gentle Murmurs

Words sweet!
My muse murmurs:
love's treat

I sigh!
With each nuance:
he's nigh

I melt!
Promised pleasures:
ALL felt

Eileen Manassian

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Copyright © Eileen Manassian | Year Posted 2014

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Liam Mcdaid Date: 12/1/2014 1:44:00 AM beautifully painted eileen Login to Reply

Leon Enriquez Date: 11/27/2014 4:44:00 PM Dear Eileen: Nicely said. Enjoyed. Leon Login to Reply

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 11/27/2014 10:18:00 AM Wow that's perfectly beautiful my dear Eileen! Shud enter into contest, why not? Another thought?? Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 11/27/2014 12:45:00 PM Dr Upma...I have my reasons for not joining. I don't always join contests. I only join when I feel that I have something that is really good. I also join if I feel that I have a legitimate chance to win. I don't set myself up for failure as it is very disheartening for me. I've read the entries...this is mediocre at best. Thank you for your love and care.

Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/27/2014 7:26:00 AM Eileen, you should enter it. I'm glad you persisted. Who would have thought that seemingly such a simple form could be so difficult. I too struggled with something that would fit the theme and actually made sense. You have accomplished both epithet this one. Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 11/27/2014 12:48:00 PM Thank you, Richard. I've read some poems that have been written in this form, and I know mine is mediocre...Perhaps next time. Yours is still my favorite.....I fall....that last stanza....the sweetest.

Charmaine Chircop Date: 11/27/2014 2:24:00 AM Melting and Melting-Wow..: ) Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 11/27/2014 12:48:00 PM Thanks, sweetie!

Eve Roper Date: 11/26/2014 9:35:00 PM Eileen, Promised pleasures as he gets near :) very good eve Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 11/27/2014 12:49:00 PM Thanks, Eve. So happy you passed by. Hugs

Tim Smith Date: 11/26/2014 4:40:00 PM Very provocative Eileen...hugs Tim Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 11/27/2014 12:50:00 PM I do like to be provocative, Tim. Thanks for the visit.

Paul Callus Date: 11/26/2014 4:27:00 PM You have tackled this one excellently, Eileen. You can't promise us pleasure and then in the same breath insert the word "perhaps"; make sure you enter it for the contest!! I love it! I'm still not happy with all the ones I've written:( // paul Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 11/27/2014 12:51:00 PM Yours is rather sweet, Paul. Thanks to Charmaine, I found out that my rhyme scheme wasn't right. I fixed it since you last visited, but it is not for the contest. Thanks for the visit.

Sebastian Aaron Baez Date: 11/26/2014 3:35:00 PM "promised pleasure" very delicious line. Makes my mind electric with the erotic :) Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 11/27/2014 12:51:00 PM Your mind is electric with erotic all the time! ;) Thanks for the visit!

Robert Stoner Jr Date: 11/26/2014 3:13:00 PM Hey that's a great entry Eileen, don't hesitate to add that to the contest. That's one hard contest to write for and you knocked it out of the park. Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 11/27/2014 12:52:00 PM Thank you for your kind words, Robert. I've decided to give this contest a miss. I appreciate the visit. I've done some changes since you last visited. I had missed the concept of rhyme scheme.

Jan Allison Date: 11/26/2014 3:04:00 PM beautifully sensual Eileen:-) Hugs jan xx Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 11/27/2014 12:53:00 PM I try, Jan. I try. Thanks, hon.

Gary Bateman Date: 11/26/2014 1:50:00 PM Eileen, Best of Luck in the contest!! You have such a way with words here. Entice . . . Melting . . . Soft Moans -- all great and most descriptive images. A Big "7" from me on this one and it's a FAV too. Enjoyed it!! Best Wishes Always, Gary Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 11/27/2014 12:54:00 PM :) Thanks, Gary. you are very kind. I appreciate the visit.