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Gentle Murmurs

Words sweet!
My muse murmurs:
love's treat

I sigh!
With each nuance:
he's nigh

I melt!
Promised pleasures:
ALL felt

Eileen Manassian

NOT for Contest

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Liam Mcdaid

December 1, 2014 at 1:44 AM

beautifully painted eileen

Leon Enriquez

November 27, 2014 at 4:44 PM

Dear Eileen: Nicely said. Enjoyed. Leon

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

November 27, 2014 at 10:18 AM

Wow that's perfectly beautiful my dear Eileen! Shud enter into contest, why not? Another thought??

Eileen Manassian

November 27, 2014 at 12:45 PM

Dr Upma...I have my reasons for not joining. I don't always join contests. I only join when I feel that I have something that is really good. I also join if I feel that I have a legitimate chance to win. I don't set myself up for failure as it is very disheartening for me. I've read the entries...this is mediocre at best. Thank you for your love and care.

Richard Lamoureux

November 27, 2014 at 7:26 AM

Eileen, you should enter it. I'm glad you persisted. Who would have thought that seemingly such a simple form could be so difficult. I too struggled with something that would fit the theme and actually made sense. You have accomplished both epithet this one.

Eileen Manassian

November 27, 2014 at 12:48 PM

Thank you, Richard. I've read some poems that have been written in this form, and I know mine is mediocre...Perhaps next time. Yours is still my favorite.....I fall....that last stanza....the sweetest.

Charmaine Chircop

November 27, 2014 at 2:24 AM

Melting and Melting-Wow..: )

Eileen Manassian

November 27, 2014 at 12:48 PM

Thanks, sweetie!

Eve Roper

November 26, 2014 at 9:35 PM

Eileen, Promised pleasures as he gets near :) very good eve

Eileen Manassian

November 27, 2014 at 12:49 PM

Thanks, Eve. So happy you passed by. Hugs

Tim Smith

November 26, 2014 at 4:40 PM

Very provocative Eileen...hugs Tim

Eileen Manassian

November 27, 2014 at 12:50 PM

I do like to be provocative, Tim. Thanks for the visit.

Paul Callus

November 26, 2014 at 4:27 PM

You have tackled this one excellently, Eileen. You can't promise us pleasure and then in the same breath insert the word "perhaps"; make sure you enter it for the contest!! I love it! I'm still not happy with all the ones I've written:( // paul

Eileen Manassian

November 27, 2014 at 12:51 PM

Yours is rather sweet, Paul. Thanks to Charmaine, I found out that my rhyme scheme wasn't right. I fixed it since you last visited, but it is not for the contest. Thanks for the visit.

Sebastian Aaron Baez

November 26, 2014 at 3:35 PM

"promised pleasure" very delicious line. Makes my mind electric with the erotic :)

Eileen Manassian

November 27, 2014 at 12:51 PM

Your mind is electric with erotic all the time! ;) Thanks for the visit!

Robert Stoner Jr

November 26, 2014 at 3:13 PM

Hey that's a great entry Eileen, don't hesitate to add that to the contest. That's one hard contest to write for and you knocked it out of the park.

Eileen Manassian

November 27, 2014 at 12:52 PM

Thank you for your kind words, Robert. I've decided to give this contest a miss. I appreciate the visit. I've done some changes since you last visited. I had missed the concept of rhyme scheme.

Jan Allison

November 26, 2014 at 3:04 PM

beautifully sensual Eileen:-) Hugs jan xx

Eileen Manassian

November 27, 2014 at 12:53 PM

I try, Jan. I try. Thanks, hon.

Gary Bateman

November 26, 2014 at 1:50 PM

Eileen, Best of Luck in the contest!! You have such a way with words here. Entice . . . Melting . . . Soft Moans -- all great and most descriptive images. A Big "7" from me on this one and it's a FAV too. Enjoyed it!! Best Wishes Always, Gary

Eileen Manassian

November 27, 2014 at 12:54 PM

:) Thanks, Gary. you are very kind. I appreciate the visit.

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