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Genie In a Gin Bottle

Her lips caress another cigarette
A fading belle looking for love
The smoke veils a creature of habit
Chasing a young girls dream

But this Genie found the palace doors locked 
Her youth distilled into a bottle of gin
Diluted by these streets of sin

Now her makeup hides the bottles content
Silk fingernails deluding the smokers hand
Her wig of blonde hiding the soul beneath
The ladder in her stockings,
Torn like her Hollywood dreams

Her perfume sickly sweet,
Masking the odor from yesterday’s gin
The ashtray is full,
Cheap lipstick covers the tab ends
Her vigil to find happiness

But he never comes.
Only a stream of chancer’s 
Wanting to spin lady luck one more time
Fuelled by the promise of paradise
A vacation from life
And a brag for Jack Daniels

Under neon lights
A Beautiful girl content in her gin bottle
Her saviour from this cruel world
An inner voice plays in her mind
“I could have been a movie star”
A role she can play all too well

But morning light never lies
Her beauty, has fled, left on the pillow
Like some Monet’s impression.
Regret lays sprawled out
Like yesterday’s salad,
Thrown out with the rubbish
For the slugs of corruption to eat
.
Her aging face revealing every rejection
Every turned down script, every broken dream
A lifetime of heart break.
But she still plays her part well
Play it again Sam
And another cigarette,


The same mistake, the same men,
From all the gin bars in the world
She had to choose this one
Another lottery ticket to litter her despair.
No winning numbers here

Her silent acceptance speech,
Laid bare in her blood shot eyes of regret
A mouthwash of gin
And the genie of love returns to her bottle
Her legs bruised and varicose,
Testament to waitress by day and genie by night.

He closes the door
His only thought to get away, not his finest hour
Jack Daniels his moral escape goat
Nosey neighbour’s his jury
They bare witness to his walk of shame

She opens the curtains,
And sees him fade into the faceless crowd
Alone again, a full ashtray and an empty gin bottle
Symbols of last night’s play
The mirror torments her image,
As she drinks coffee through smoke stained teeth

A wave of her head, a smile
And a daydream
Tonight, her prince will save her
This is her delusion, her reason to live

But time is running out
For she is part of life’s crap game.
The dice rolls once more
Will it be happiness? or loneliness?
But in the end, deep down she knows
The house always wins in tinsel town.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/24/2011 10:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Everyone Knows" contest Steven. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/22/2011 8:44:00 PM
Congrats steven on a wonderful win with this elegant poetry so dynamic luv.. so very happy PS is back on board .. great to be here once again..luv..
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Date: 10/22/2011 1:09:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Steve. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 10/22/2011 12:41:00 PM
Your descriptions are so vivid and so right on. This is a masterful piece. Bravo. Congratulations on your win
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Date: 9/28/2011 10:59:00 PM
Hi Steven, your powerful poems pull me in with such magnetism. You deliver the whole story without a flaw. This gal is truly finished and I am fading but still have enough kick to intrigue my man thank goodness. Luv u always, Lizzie.
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Date: 8/30/2011 10:45:00 PM
a powerful write on the rise and falls of dreams and anticipations. loved it !
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Date: 8/30/2011 9:41:00 PM
To be or not to be? Your wisdom is in your experience. Good work. Jim
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Date: 8/12/2011 12:27:00 PM
wonderful pen
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Date: 8/10/2011 10:08:00 AM
Great poem, great use of metaphor. Thanks for your comment on mine.
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Date: 8/10/2011 9:56:00 AM
hey Steven great pictures you portray here and it keeps you till the end, well done, David.
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Date: 8/10/2011 7:54:00 AM
Steven, this is an incredible write. Your powers of observation, memory, imagery, desciption and imagination are all combined to form this masterpiece...which is what I think it is. I would put you in my favs but you are already there. This poem will go into my favs so I may read it again. there is so much in it. It is loaded , my friend! congrats to you on a great free verse.
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Date: 8/10/2011 6:27:00 AM
Nice story of the sad woman you have penned here Steven.Enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 8/9/2011 5:19:00 PM
Wow, beautiful sad but true write mate, I love it.....with love....old Jack
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Date: 8/9/2011 3:00:00 PM
or was it " sunset boulevard" i saw on reruns? :)
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Date: 8/9/2011 2:59:00 PM
reminscent of the movie, " sunset drive", steven... when all that fame and exterior beauty fades, tour spendid write will shine with wisdom and truth... stunning with images that fly! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 8/9/2011 4:10:00 AM
wow.. this is really great Steven.. tells a story vividly... Thanks for sharing!!!!!
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Date: 8/9/2011 1:46:00 AM
Wow. I totally enjoyed reading this, Steven. I honestly think you have a wonderful talent in creating the scene in your poetry-- very vivid; almost as if I am watching this myself-- and what you say here is so true-- Really liked this impressive piece :)
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Date: 8/8/2011 9:22:00 PM
It can be a tough life for a pretty girl when beauty fades. "Gather ye rosebuds while ye may..." That lottery ticket is many people's retirement plan these days.
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Date: 8/8/2011 6:28:00 PM
Steven, if I didn't know better, I would say you were writing about Blanche Dubois in Tennessee William's play "Streetcar Named Desire." Everything you say about this sad woman's plight relates to Blanche...and we are all getting older, but I am not living with delusions that a prince will save me. Awesome poem for my faves. Putting you in my faves as well, Steven. This really is incredible writing. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/8/2011 6:02:00 PM
impressive write steven.. a tale of hopes and dreams demolished by vices of life... nicely penned luv.. a brilliant storyline... vivid images... yes the sad ending is true in your last line.. no one beats the house .. ever..
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