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Genesis

GENESIS On the writhing shoreline’s shifting sand The thrust of the immovable hard land Under the foaming white wedding dress of the ocean Resolves their differences, puts their destiny in motion. In endless rhythm of sheer strife, The soft all-pervading giver of life Swells o’er the sure-faced surface of her mate, To and fro, in and out, in a perfect fit. She shapes the hardness of the land and he, Massively strong, just as surely shapes the sea : The end of one is the beginning of the other - On the shoreline - this father and mother Share the task, create and shape Each bay and bight, each coast and cape. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Sonnet written by Sydney Peck 23 January 2012 for Francine’s contest. Theme : lasting love . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . *This idea for this poem was ”inspired by” ( hi-falutin language for “stolen from” ) Andrea D’s LAND-OCEAN haiku. Thank you A D.

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Date: 4/19/2013 9:49:00 PM
Sidney, Congratulations IN HONOR OF Andrea's favorite POEM contest. *Always & Forever' @->- LINDA -<-@
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Date: 4/19/2013 9:37:00 PM
Many congrats my dear Sidney! This is indeed great and amazing ! I love it & so enjoyed. Thank you so much for sharing and the smiles here! Have a grace-filled day! Love and hugs, Leonora
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Date: 4/19/2013 8:38:00 PM
Sidney, a sweet win~*~SKAT
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Date: 1/24/2012 3:25:00 PM
Dreaming Syd perhaps a wee bit too much alliteration? [life's resolved its differences put destiny in motion][To and fro, in and out, perfect rhythm insensate][Each bay, each bight, each coast and cape.] Light & Love Always
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Date: 1/23/2012 2:21:00 PM
wowowow, Sydney, an excellent sonnet and I see you made the land the man and the ocean the woman. I was conflicted which way to go myself with that one!! but i ended up giving the male role to the ocean so that the female land could dress in different seasons (always in fashion heehee) I really like it with the land as male! I'm so glad to have inspired this incredible poem! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 1/23/2012 11:14:00 AM
Enjoyed the imagery. Nicely done !!
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