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Genesis

Inch worm inch by inch Butterfly hue upon hue Locust dying soon

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/6/2009 3:29:00 PM
Great Haiku. I can just see the Inch worm moving along. Keep the magical and creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 6/24/2009 8:56:00 PM
original, creative theme in this cool haiku! Justin! nice win! jim
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Date: 6/24/2009 5:26:00 PM
Excellent haiku!! Very clever! Congratulations!
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Date: 6/24/2009 4:13:00 PM
Beautiful! Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest! ~Trudy~
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Date: 6/24/2009 3:24:00 PM
Very different and well done. Congrats on your success in the contest. BG
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Date: 5/24/2009 6:36:00 PM
Thanks for supporting my contest Justin...Raul
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Date: 5/24/2009 5:56:00 PM
Very nice haiku, Justin!
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