Generational Rip

my closure not worth
      opening denial's door
 
       rest in peace at last




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Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Faulkner Avatar
May 6, 2020 at 6:50 PM
I guess that's why ignorance is bliss!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 6, 2020 at 8:46 PM
Nailed it! Bliss, coping mechanism, the gift that keeps on giving. ;), xomo!
Sikorski Avatar
May 4, 2020 at 10:56 AM
Words to live by !
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 4, 2020 at 11:50 AM
Thank you! The damage has to stop somewhere ;), xomo
Deo Avatar
May 4, 2020 at 10:27 AM
Sis, you are a winner. Romans 8 taught me, "dark forces evoke guilt, the Spirit convicts. Big difference." Only saying it as it helped me (Your poems sizzle-sazzle, educate, and dazzle. Ignore my 2cents)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 4, 2020 at 11:51 AM
Thank you my friend. And no, those 2cents add up. ;), xomo!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 4, 2020 at 8:49 AM
Some things are best left alone!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 4, 2020 at 9:08 AM
Why ruffle a death bed ;), xomo
Krutsinger Avatar
May 4, 2020 at 6:54 AM
Sounds like you are wiping your sandals of this bull stuff.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 4, 2020 at 8:19 AM
It seems my muse is doing some spring cleaning. <3
Wolf Avatar
May 3, 2020 at 8:42 PM
Profound. Denial leaves all wounds open and festering... :) gw
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 4, 2020 at 8:16 AM
Yes it does. Thank you dear Comrade Wolf Man, xomo
Theraven Avatar
May 3, 2020 at 5:32 PM
Maureen, Proof again, good things come in small packages. So much to read of this. So much water under and over this bridge. Bear hugs xxx -Richard
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 4, 2020 at 8:15 AM
Thank you Richard. I can still feel like I am drowning some days, but at least guilt is not pulling me down. Butterfly kisses, xomo
Gauthier Avatar
May 3, 2020 at 5:18 PM
Bravo, Maureen ~ powerful in its multidirectional possibilities of interpretation but definitely empowering.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 4, 2020 at 8:00 AM
Thank you Line, so much. xomo
Trifiatis Avatar
May 3, 2020 at 1:59 PM
SUPERB dearest , Maureen. Loved it! Hugs xxx
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 3, 2020 at 2:01 PM
Realtime HUGS!!!!! <3
Bauer Avatar
May 3, 2020 at 1:48 PM
ooh - very wise and well-said, maureen!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 3, 2020 at 2:02 PM
Thank you Ilene! xomo :)))
Leffanta Avatar
May 3, 2020 at 1:21 PM
Aye, nailed it? Aloha! Rico
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 3, 2020 at 1:59 PM
More like a sticky note ;), mo Hugs
Dietrich Avatar
May 3, 2020 at 12:50 PM
Impactful, Maureen!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 3, 2020 at 1:06 PM
Thank you Andrea, stay safe, xomo!
Allison Avatar
May 3, 2020 at 12:13 PM
oh believe me Mo i can relate big time! sharp ink indeed:-) hugs Jan xx
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 3, 2020 at 12:22 PM
I do remember something affecting we've talked about; wisdom is not gained without pain, and wiser we are for not causing more pain <3 ...however much it sucks ;), HUGS! Thank you ~x
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