Gene and Gilda

Star crossed champions of mirth
Wild hair and wild eyes, both 
To the world they say with arms raised to the sky, 
"What a pity, for we dearly love to laugh!" 
Arm in arm, singing their favorite show tunes 
But in the voices of Donald Duck and Calamity Jane
Gallivanting through the city, doing the Charleston in the street 
These two have no interest or talent for growing up 
And made the world lighter because of it 

Willy Wonka in his purple jacket,
Holding the door for her with his cane,
Him with those dreamy eyes
Pale eyes that swim in her perpetual smile
A smile, a voice and a soul that lit up everything for miles 
She sits, glowing in the window, 
Like a princess in the white room, wearing her little barrette
But she isn't well at all 

And so she left this world, Roseannadanna did, one morning 
And the twinkle in his eye twinkled off into space 
With her dimples, impromptu cartwheels and spinning skirts  
Four years wasn't enough to fill up the laughing box 
The glass elevator is lonely looking down on the world 

Wait, wait, wait, BAM!
Would she want him sinking there in his spats? 
A wop, bam, boo! No, choose instead to keep that wicked grin 
Dance down the aisle of the plane, show that funny funny face 
Embrace each Saturday Night gone by 
To Gene and Gilda, geniuses of love and light hearts 
Pop the cork on the champagne and roller skate through this life!


~For Heather Ober's Famous Couples/Duos Poetry 
Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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April 15, 2013 at 8:58 PM
Jeremy, Congratulations with your winning poem in Heather's "Famous Couples/Duos" contest. ~Always* Linda
Guzzi Avatar
April 12, 2013 at 3:49 PM
Great pick, wonderful comic genuises! VERY sophisticated choice [man I feel stupid now LOL] should have been higher! way higher Light & Love
Hendricks Avatar
April 12, 2013 at 1:18 PM
Congratulations on your well-deserved placement. Good one, Jeremy :)
Taylor Avatar
April 12, 2013 at 1:03 PM
Congrats, Jeremy. Excellent. Ralph
Oyewole Avatar
April 12, 2013 at 12:34 PM
Congrats on your win~ A.O
Puddifoot Avatar
April 11, 2013 at 4:29 AM
congrats on your win in the contest, a well written story on this pair :)
Martin Avatar
April 18, 2013 at 6:53 AM
Thank you, Charlotte.
Lamoureux Avatar
April 10, 2013 at 9:18 PM
Tremendous job, congratulations.
Martin Avatar
April 18, 2013 at 6:46 AM
Hey, thanks, Richard.
Johnson Avatar
April 10, 2013 at 7:10 PM
A very loved and fated pair. Good job. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Martin Avatar
April 18, 2013 at 6:45 AM
Thank you, Joyce.
Bauer Avatar
April 10, 2013 at 5:48 PM
this is a beautiful tribute to a wonderful and very funny pair. i love it!
Martin Avatar
April 18, 2013 at 6:45 AM
Thanks, Ilene!
Jones Avatar
April 10, 2013 at 3:52 PM
Congratulations Jeremy...wonderful win!!!! :-)
Martin Avatar
April 10, 2013 at 5:35 PM
Thanks Donna!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
April 10, 2013 at 10:22 AM
Congratulations Jeremy xx
Martin Avatar
April 10, 2013 at 5:35 PM
Thanx Mandy :)
Ober Avatar
April 10, 2013 at 9:35 AM
Jeremy, this poem is showing up on the winners list as 6th, but I meant to rank it 3rd. I have no idea how to edit this - I don't think it's possible :( Just know that I LOVED reading your poem. You are such a skilled free verse writer. Big congratulations on your win in my contest, and I'm sorry for the judging error!
Martin Avatar
April 10, 2013 at 5:34 PM
Much appreciated, Heather!! Awesome contest
Dietrich Avatar
April 9, 2013 at 3:04 PM
oh, I just LOVE the couple you chose to emulate. I feel they were truly in love and their story is a sad one but for a while they knew happiness. LIke Suz said, I agree this is brilliant. A fave.
Martin Avatar
April 10, 2013 at 5:34 PM
Thanks, Andrea!!!!
Delaney Avatar
April 6, 2013 at 12:42 AM
Wow this is brilliant...you have captured their spirits....a winner in my eyes.
Martin Avatar
April 6, 2013 at 7:19 AM
Really kind of you, thanks Suzanne!
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