Gemma

It's Dark. The heat of the day lingers through the night. I'm lost in this old, creaky house. I want time to stop. The thought of losing her keeps me from ending this day with rest. I think of you. The still frames of your beautiful soul flash through my mind, keeping me sane, safe from the madness creeping over me.

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Skat A

Date: 7/9/2013 12:19:00 PM

Hi Seamus, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/9/2013 12:20:00 AM

Seamus, -Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I’m here to invite you on over to my contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -If you ever need or seek feedback on a certain poem, click on my name any time you like. I’m looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/8/2013 4:24:00 AM

- Hello Seamus. - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thanks for your first poem, hope there will be many more in the future. - Have fun with poetry. - Good luck! - Greetings from Norway / / Anne-Lise :)