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Oh my Gemini wall flower, I wonder how your buds blossom, as fragile florets yearn for foundations, encouraging their roots to bloom. If I should sow you into erratic earth, suspicious sun might suppress its love, relentless rain may suffocate your air, with wicked winds stripping your petals. So I will hold you in my hands, compassionately caress your soul. Implant you in my heart, so my love can cultivate you - protecting you from the storm. Empathetic eyes will gaze, enchanted by your elegance, lost within the tranquillity of your rare radiant scent. Oh my Gemini wall flower, you may be a lotus or a rose, it does not matter much to me. Simple Musing Silent One 12 March 2018

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Phyllis Babcock

Date: 12/27/2019 9:47:00 PM

Well expressed in this wonderful poem. I think we like to protect many from the storms of life yet hide what we really feel inside. love phyl

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/6/2018 11:08:00 AM

I don't know how the buds blossom but I'm sure you know, Lovely musings dear poet

Akkina Downing

Date: 3/27/2018 8:05:00 PM

Just had the need to reread this...

Jean Murray

Date: 3/19/2018 6:14:00 AM

Self love is vital and to be protected at all costs. If only we could be born with that prior knowledge.

Silent One
Date: 3/20/2018 4:35:00 PM

You are right Jean... Thank you

Paul Callus

Date: 3/18/2018 1:26:00 PM

The need to love and protect is very conspicuous in your words, S-1. A lovely poem filled with deep feelings. Regards // paul

Silent One
Date: 3/20/2018 4:35:00 PM

Thank you Paul..

Eve Roper

Date: 3/16/2018 1:37:00 PM

another beautiful written verse :) Hugs Eve ~`*

Silent One
Date: 3/17/2018 6:39:00 AM

Thanks..

Supraja Kannan

Date: 3/15/2018 4:22:00 AM

What a beautiful imagery... Incredible... Loved it...

Silent One
Date: 3/15/2018 9:17:00 AM

Thanks Sup..

Akkina Downing

Date: 3/14/2018 7:29:00 PM

I lOVE IT!!!

Silent One
Date: 3/15/2018 9:17:00 AM

thanks..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/14/2018 3:37:00 PM

simple but beautiful musings, Silent One, Keep up the golden quill.

Silent One
Date: 3/15/2018 9:17:00 AM

Thanks..

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 3/13/2018 7:25:00 PM

Another superbly written tender write Silent One!~Che :)

Silent One
Date: 3/15/2018 9:25:00 AM

Thanks Che..

Robert Lindley

Date: 3/13/2018 3:37:00 PM

So deep, rich and beautiful for simple musings my friend. Elegant beauty and profound thoughts that enrich the readers that truly care about poetry... A FAV.....

Silent One
Date: 3/15/2018 9:28:00 AM

Thank you Robert..

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 3/13/2018 1:06:00 AM

I certainly love the Gems in my life, and you're one of them. Beautifully written - and great song choice by the way. The flower duet is very nostalgic for me. "relentless rain may suffocate your air, with wicked winds stripping your petals." They need their freedom to breathe and flourish!"as fragile florets yearn for foundations" Such a gorgeous line. Always, Laura

Silent One
Date: 3/15/2018 9:44:00 AM

Nice to see you Laura, everyone one needs a Gemini in their life... Thank you..

Janice Canerdy

Date: 3/13/2018 12:51:00 AM

Superb personification. S.O! Janice

Silent One
Date: 3/15/2018 9:45:00 AM

Thank you Janice...

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton

Date: 3/12/2018 11:24:00 PM

Sheesh! How do you do it? Uber romantique.

Silent One
Date: 3/15/2018 9:45:00 AM

Thank you, but this was not one for romance ,but self reflection...

Silent One
Date: 3/15/2018 9:45:00 AM

Will look up that song thanks

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 3/12/2018 11:25:00 PM

I like that song, "Scent of Magnolia" by David Sylvian. Haven't listened to your song here yet. Must do.

Vera Duggan

Date: 3/12/2018 8:59:00 PM

This is so beautiful for a simple musing SO, I looked and read this two ways, Gemini Wall flower could be an actual flower or a romantic piece about your lady, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this, take care......Vera

Silent One
Date: 3/15/2018 11:04:00 AM

Thank you, it is a self reflective poem.. Wallflower is a metaphor for one's body and gemini a starsign...

Harriet Shea

Date: 3/12/2018 7:54:00 PM

Beautifully penned. I so enjoyed how you poured your emotions in this piece..Keep writing deep, your heart will sing with grace.. Hugs--Harriet

Silent One
Date: 3/15/2018 11:06:00 AM

Thank you Harriet, I do like deep poetry..

Jack Ellison

Date: 3/12/2018 5:54:00 PM

One word dear friend... BRILLIANT/AMAZING!!! Okay, that's two words!!! Still... you know what I'm trying to say!!! Cheers, your friend, Happy Jack xx

Silent One
Date: 3/15/2018 11:07:00 AM

Thank you my friend, nice to see you..

Judith S

Date: 3/12/2018 1:12:00 PM

Your not-so-simple musings are amazingly rich with complexity. And you have such talent for alliteration. So lovely to read :)

Silent One
Date: 3/15/2018 11:08:00 AM

Thank you Judy, next poem will have none though lol

Mike Gentile

Date: 3/12/2018 12:39:00 PM

what matters is that you have love and love to give which I believe that you have beautifully illustrated here, Silent One Happy Monday!!!!

Silent One
Date: 3/15/2018 11:10:00 AM

Thank you Mike...

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 3/12/2018 11:20:00 AM

I immensely enjoyed this poem, SO. The lilting cadence of each stanza is very well crafted. A sublime and gentle fragrance scented poem. Love and smiles always.

Silent One
Date: 3/15/2018 11:11:00 AM

Thank you romantic warrior..

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/12/2018 8:46:00 AM

You painted this with delicate words of love. Your poem echos compassion and admiration for another..very elegantly depicted in simple words. Well done, Silent One.

Silent One
Date: 3/15/2018 11:13:00 AM

Thank you Vijay..