Gemini Garden,Silent One

“hope floats from purple petals to ebony buds” 
- Silent One

In darkness, I dreamt in color,
with eyelids fluttering like butterflies.
I’d thought I’d see sunlight,
before I fell into a trance, but hope
tickled the air and the sandman was there,
not to torture but to divine adventure.

“Purple petals and ebony buds,” like pollen
sticks to the fluttering wings of butterflies.
In cruising altitude, felicity is decked out.
The garden site’s lit up with fairy lights.

Trellis rose blooms, suave in velvet,
like a smartly dressed groom in a new tuxedo.
I float, in my restful state, as a bright butterfly,
better than ever, testing my titillated wings.

In darkness, I dreamt in color.
In sunlight, I awaken to the tease
of a truant dream, a rose plucked
and tenderly tickles my cheek and neck;
silent is the touch of a purple leafwing.
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July 3, 2024 at 2:07 PM
I really love the opening lines to your poem.. I would have placed this one first.. You really have developed your poetry so well.. Thanks for writing and congratulations on your placement..
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July 3, 2024 at 2:28 PM
Thank you, Silent! Happy Birthday, my friend. I have learned so much from Soupers and contests :)
Canerdy Avatar
July 2, 2024 at 3:03 PM
Kim, this is SO beautiful! CONGRATS on your win. Janice
Rodrigues Avatar
July 2, 2024 at 3:41 PM
Thank you, Janice!
Empress Avatar
July 2, 2024 at 1:15 PM
Dear kim, my eyelids literally fluttered like butterflies as i read this poetic gem so well woven with exquisite wordplay and metaphors! So beautiful and fitting for the quote too . I especially loved “ In darkness, I dreamt in color. In sunlight, I awaken to the tease” just wow!! Brilliant! Thank you for joining. Congratulations on your win
Rodrigues Avatar
July 2, 2024 at 3:40 PM
Thank you for sharing what you liked, IE! <3
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July 2, 2024 at 10:29 AM
That’s beautiful poetry in Free verse Kim. Congratulations on your win in Ink’s contest. (Kim I read your lovely comments on my contest entry, I answered and had made a spelling error, went to correct it and deleted your reply by mistake, so sorry but a big Thank You… Beryl
Rodrigues Avatar
July 2, 2024 at 10:47 AM
OOps…lol! Thanks for letting me know. Hugs
Brul Avatar
July 2, 2024 at 10:21 AM
Congratulations dear Kim. This is so lovely! Intricately woven like a delicate fabric to be worn in nocturnal tryst! Great tribute to SO.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 2, 2024 at 10:47 AM
I appreciate you so and hope that Silent enjoys all the love sent his way and the sweet poet who presented us all with a lovely contest!
Goldsmith Avatar
July 2, 2024 at 9:37 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful write/ending. Love your line, "In darkness, I dreamt in color. Oh yes, in color...  Have a great day writing away...............
Rodrigues Avatar
July 2, 2024 at 10:45 AM
Thank you, Paula!
Hind Avatar
June 25, 2024 at 6:42 PM
Gosh, Kim, this is really, really beautiful. The end is ethereal, and sweet, at the same time, beautiful work, again, Kim- xx<3
Rodrigues Avatar
June 25, 2024 at 8:23 PM
Thank you, Paige! :)
Greenhough Avatar
June 25, 2024 at 5:24 PM
Fantastic scene of a dream garden. I like the many images and especially the happy waking to beauty.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 25, 2024 at 8:23 PM
Thank you, Hilda!
Slaughter Avatar
June 25, 2024 at 9:44 AM
Great piece, Kim. I love the imagery of "The garden site's lit up with fairy lights."
Rodrigues Avatar
June 25, 2024 at 8:23 PM
Glad you enjoyed that part, Jim! :)
Daniel Avatar
June 25, 2024 at 5:18 AM
Wow! Brilliant:)
Rodrigues Avatar
June 25, 2024 at 8:24 PM
Thank you kindly, Joanna! :)
George Avatar
June 25, 2024 at 4:32 AM
Such a lovely fantasy, dear Kim! "Trellis rose blooms, suave in velvet, like a smartly dressed groom in a new tuxedo." Love this comparison and like a butterfly you float on your 'titillated wings'..! What a beautiful dream. After reading this, I too float on the wings of imagination.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 25, 2024 at 8:25 PM
We will fly together! Thanks so much!
Anaya Avatar
June 24, 2024 at 10:13 PM
It's a purple fantasy, Kimmy, were all even the unexpected are involved. Cool beans! xhugs ~Anaya
Rodrigues Avatar
June 25, 2024 at 8:25 PM
LOL…love that you said, “cool beans.” xoxo
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